|Reviews for Pilgrim|
| Patrick-Henry chapter 1 . 2/21/2008
Wow, wow, wow.
You are so imaginative. And this is perfect! I can tell you worked hard! How do you know so many archaic words? Really, it's amazing.
| Kuro Garyuu chapter 1 . 2/19/2008
Wow...very, very clever! :) I like Carlisle stories, too!
| JerseyBella chapter 1 . 2/19/2008
I really enjoyed this story. Its never occured to me to think more about Carlisle, but this certainly got me going. Very well done, good work.
| bellarina chapter 1 . 2/19/2008
Haha, that was very interesting. It would only make sense that in all his years and travels that Carlisle would have crossed paths of those we know now to be famous. It was different to see him agonising over his thirst, so unlike the Carlisle we know now, but obviously in his early days as a vampire he must have struggled a lot.
| nothingmoreridiculous chapter 1 . 2/18/2008
AH! LOVE this FF! Its amazing! Very clever; a seamless blend of the true past and Meyer's imagined past. I find it totally palusible, and I truly enjoyed reading it.
Kudos to you!
| dawning beauty chapter 1 . 2/18/2008
wow, I didn;t understand some of it, but that's probably because my brai8n has turned to mush from all my homework...very creative
| blackolives10 chapter 1 . 2/18/2008
This is wonderful. Silence Dogood! Who would have thought? :)
| Cullenista chapter 1 . 2/18/2008
Love all the description of the New World and your portrayal of Carlisle’s thirst is excellent. Carlisle always makes it look easy to be good so this is a refreshing take on his internal struggle. Clearly well thought out and well executed. The righteous Carlisle is so attractive! Great idea to conjure up the young Franklin. A real treat.
| speed-is-everything chapter 1 . 2/18/2008
You did a wonderful job keeping to the era!
The Silence Dogood letters was a great idea for this challenge!
Keep up the brilliant work!
| Javidan chapter 1 . 2/18/2008
Wonderful! All the details, the accurate language; it made me feel like I was there! "a Woman's Work is never done" - amen to that! *grudgingly goes back to the housework*
| PurpleMatter chapter 1 . 2/18/2008
Another great story! I'm not sure if yoy meant this to happen, or if I'm just weird (it's likely, too, you know) but I was laughing so hard at the end. Ah, poor Ben, got caught by a *vampire*!
At the beginning, because you put the challenge in your AN, I was looking up every name on google, wondering why I had never heard of them. LOL!
| NoMoreThanUsual chapter 1 . 2/18/2008
OMG The Silence Dogood letters? That's great!
As always, Eowyn, I am awed. Your story is excellent! I love the details you've incorporated. It's so believable.
Awesome. Simply awesome.
| blondie AKA robin chapter 1 . 2/18/2008
Me thinks you would be partial to 'National Treasure' as well as I?
All the silver in my pocket for a writing such as this.