These girls won’t let up. This can only happen to Harry.

Nice fic, I enjoyed it. Thanks for the sweet read.

Fun read, but it pretty much requires a sequel, there's a lot of loose ends to tie up.

I know this rather old, but I came across it in a search and decided too check it out. Fairly amusing so far. I did want to comment on a couple things about this chapter. First, it's good that Harry finally spoke up about the feeding him thing, I can't see it being anything but frustrating and humiliating so I'm glad he spoke up.

Second is a comment on Daphne's contract. I know you likely didn't intend it this way, but the way it's phrased basically encourages her to kill Harry. If she kills him or somehow arranges for him to die, she is free, and gets his entire estate, likely including the other girls. While at the same time she is basically completely protected from him, so he likely couldn't even try to fight back, though he might be able to order her to stop if he's fast enough, its not clear how the slavery contract enforce orders. So assuming she starts with a silencing spell so he can't speak any orders, Harry is basically screwed as soon as she gets him alone, assuming she is so inclined. So to be honest, I was pretty surprised that Harry agreed to the contract. Even if there is some general aspect to stop slaves from attacking their owner, she could likely arrange for his death. It might not be what you had intended, but its an aspect of the phrasing that pretty much jumped out at me.

So, is calling it a “shortfic” part of the joke? Given that this is over 100k words king?

Superb rashomon chapter.
The banter is also fantastic.
Character backstory and background could use polish.
Interactions off the charts.

i loved this little story i hope you write more to fuel my reading addiction thanks

CHAPERONES! That’s the word. These are incompetent chaperones

Fairly incompetent watchers (I’m brain farting on the term, where the adults manage the children)

And Harrykins gets ANOTHER one. Poor devil.

I like this story so far but I want to point that you can only discard a maximum of 4 card and you can only do that if the 5th card is an Ace besides that the Max is 3 Cards

Forgot ffn doesn’t like links. Rowling said on Twitter that her name is Myrtle Elizabeth Warren. Granted, she finally said this 7 years after you wrote this, so your fanon remains valid, but I found it interesting.

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The fic is incredibly well written and the plot is fun and original yet there is one thing that irks me endlessly. Harry is such a prude which on its own would be fine yet the authors need to mention his prudishness almost every other paragraph is rather grating.

Okay, he doesn’t want to touch the girls sexually or put himself in compromising positions with them(despite their willingness), you’ve said it now move on.

Uhhh you don't inherit someone elses karma. In fact, Ron's karma should be massively negative after all his outbursts and jealousy issues...