Reviews for Dreamsome
Helisse chapter 1 . 1/8/2009
Nice :)
extraordinaire chapter 1 . 2/20/2008
Aw! That was really cute! Go parentheses! Anyways, i loved it and great job!
InosBane chapter 1 . 2/19/2008
Again, lovely. The parentheses work!
Temari.fl chapter 1 . 2/19/2008
loved it! it was great.. i love how shika gets in bed first and lets her lay on him(kind of)very cute! Great work :)
TaintedMoonlight chapter 1 . 2/18/2008
The parenthesis, very nice touch, fits in very nicely, and you did manage the calm atmosphre very perfectly. It just sounds so nice and relaxing. And lovely. _

I like all the bracket bits and think they work well except for this one:

(He cannot remember how this started, nevertheless it has become a ritual of sorts between them.)

It seems a bit abrupt where it's at. Granted it still goes nicely with the fic, but doesn't flow and fit quite as natrually and lovingly as the others do.

Very good little thing. (I just love your flower snippets!)

~Jenni~
The Known and Unknown chapter 1 . 2/18/2008
The parenthesis are good, but... a little annoying.

Anyways, so cute!
Saiyaka chapter 1 . 2/18/2008
Yup,that was great and just makes me smile while I read it.

Good it up!