Reviews for Physically Impossible
BloodWolf87 chapter 1 . 8/3/2020
Juicy
Zoe chapter 1 . 6/26/2020
Remember that your main audience are teens that are just learning about sexual relationships and consent. This story promotes rape and unhealthy stereotypes and any little girl who reads it can become confused. What if a girl finds herself in a similar situation and fails to identify the red lights because of this story? I know you wrote this long ago as you said in your bio but now you know what it implies. From the many comments addressing it, you know. Take this away, it's irresponsible to keep this in a public site transited by children (no matter the editing you put). Be the bigger person and be responsible for yourself and the things you put online.
Elezzra chapter 1 . 4/8/2020
Why are people having sex in the common room... this is a public setting... anyone could walk in lol also hmm...
Guest chapter 1 . 9/18/2019
I think this is problematic not only for the depiction of men who reciprocate sexually as rare, mystical, nearly non existence unicorns but also for the heavy noncon/rape culture being promoted here. It is NOT realistic or heavy to act like the basic matter of returning an orgasm (or multiple) is super far fetched and impossible to imagine; this depiction not only generated an unhealthy “wow a man who does that must be a god/deserve my undying appreciation” vibe but it also is just a disservice to men in general. In reality men are much more capable and commonly willing than this implies, and young teens shouldn’t be taught to expect that they just won’t get good sex (or that they should worship a man who provides it).
I think the non con tones here are very blatant and I don’t see the need to expand on that.
SophisticatedSage chapter 1 . 7/13/2019
I feel like you should have at least a warning in the author's note or summary because this story triggered some people from the reviews I've read. As a Draco fan, I'm disappointed of the way he's portrayed.
desperatelyobvious chapter 1 . 5/19/2019
From the way it was written, sounds like it was only 2 orgasms :o Also, I think you should put a non-con warning in your AN. Otherwise, great job on the onehsot!
FriendofTrees chapter 1 . 5/3/2019
That was hilarious and amazing. Absolute classic!
Sheelahdog chapter 1 . 2/11/2019
OMG That was hilarious!
TallDarkAndHandsome chapter 1 . 12/9/2018
aaaah this was so great
Guest chapter 1 . 9/7/2018
Rape. Is. Not. Ok!
I'm astounded by the amount of comments that haven't even picked up on the assault (both times!) Yes, you write very well and this is not a bashing on how good you are as a writer but please can we stop romanticing rape?! As someone who has been in a relationship that had similar incidents to this fic (except without the alarmingly happy reaction from Hermione) this was far too triggering. I hope that young girls do not read this and think this is ok/correct behaviour in any relationship or sexual encounter.
Guest chapter 1 . 9/1/2018
Loved it!
Emily chapter 1 . 8/19/2018
Fantastic!
Noppoh chapter 1 . 8/12/2018
Holy hot damn!
MangoSunbeams chapter 1 . 7/1/2018
perfect in every way
Cupcake17 chapter 1 . 6/21/2018
Now, i understand why this story is best smut.
Damn this story is so hooottt
This is legend
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