|Reviews for Attack of the Raven|
| kataangkissed chapter 31 . 6/27/2010
I have been reading this for a while now and really liked it. However there where quite a few things I didn't like, such as winry being rather out of character a lot. I don't thinks she would get used to roy and riza so quickly, she really did love her other parents.
Another thing was Olivia's hand, Winry says she put it on soon after the battle, but it is meant to take a lot of time to be prepared for automail and even longer to get used to it.
It also bugged me that envy just "died" I would of liked to know how and where he did.
Otherwise I really liked this, the idea was awesome and I really loved the ending with Ed and winry! I couldn't sop giggling. XDDD
| Katty008 chapter 2 . 6/19/2008
I can't wait until Ed finds out. He's going to go supernova.
| Katty008 chapter 1 . 6/19/2008
That's whacked! That's AWESOME! I love it!
| Apathetical chapter 31 . 4/6/2008
sorry it took me so long, my computer had a virus :( so sad...
But a great chapter to read!
| Right Is Never Wrong chapter 31 . 4/4/2008
I'm to lazy to log in...enough explained...
I finally get home from school and low in behold you updated! :)
But now i'm sad...it's the last chapter...
| MoonStarDutchess chapter 31 . 4/4/2008
You did a good job with this story. I really enjoyed it. Your plots are excellent just add a bit more description and less repetition and you are good to go!
10 out of 10 for this one my friend.
| Apathetical chapter 30 . 4/4/2008
:) I finally got my computer back! Some idiotic virus had infected it...damn virus! bU HEY, i LOG AN AN THERES another great chapter to read!
| Lovelyships914 chapter 31 . 4/3/2008
I'am a little bit sad that the story is over but it was a very good story overall, with a happy ending, so I'am not so much for writing this story, I appreciate it, I can't wait to read other stories you write. :D
| Lovelyships914 chapter 30 . 4/2/2008
Well this chapter was awesome. I can't wait to read the next, final chapter. Thanks :)
| Apathetical chapter 29 . 4/1/2008
God you people hate me don't you! You give a greast chapter throw in some action AND then leave off at a cliffhanger!
| Lovelyships914 chapter 29 . 4/1/2008
Aww I thought all the danger has ended but I guess I was wrong. It's alright as long as I get to read your story. Thanks for updating so soon, and fast. I can't wait to read the next chapter. :)
| Apathetical chapter 28 . 3/30/2008
lol I laughed over the cocroach thing...
If Raven comes back ca I kill ham myself?
| Lovelyships914 chapter 28 . 3/30/2008
T thought this chapter was excellent. I kinda glad the chapter's not over yet, but you said that another bad thing is coming. Well I do hope that Winry's prediction comes true...maybe a little bro? I can't wait to read the next chapter. Thanks for the update. :)
| Apathetical chapter 27 . 3/28/2008
I like it!
| Apathetical chapter 26 . 3/27/2008
Sad and suspenful at the exact same time...
(I FINALLY figured out how to spell awseome!)