Reviews for A Day In the Life
Lara-Van chapter 1 . 8/6/2008
Oh I just LOVED this book, and you've captured Mara's personality *just* so! I love it!
Vividus chapter 1 . 4/5/2008
It needs a bit of work; although I can understand it all, I had to think a bit to make sure I knew what you were saying.

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Chibi's Sister chapter 1 . 3/26/2008
Tone, detail, and characterization fit Mara very well. The names seemed rather odd though-Shabti is a thing, not a name, and Kaiku just seems very Japanese, and there didn't seem to be a lot of structure or depth to the piece. But we need more Mara fic, so who's complaining.
cateyes123 chapter 1 . 2/19/2008
very nice and detailed _