Reviews for Untitled
BiggestSVUFAN chapter 2 . 2/22/2008
hey

omg love it but elliot and olivia have to end up together lol:P

great chapter love it!
girlfic chapter 2 . 2/20/2008
Yikes! What a great story! More Please!
Blood.Laws.and.Wands chapter 2 . 2/20/2008
Hey the story is really good.

I like where you're going with this...

Maybe you could call it, Private Caller or something along those lines.

The dialogue parts are kind of hard to understand as far as who is speaking. It would be easier to read if you tried to separate the sentences into who's talking, like, have a line for when elliot speaks and a different line for when Liv speaks, then another line for when Elliot speaks. it just makes it easier for us readers to read and understand the story.

Keep up the good work!
Marie2185 chapter 2 . 2/20/2008
holy crap! how did he get in so fast without elliot hearing him? please update soon. fyi you should space the sentences out a little so it's not so hard to read. but other than that it was great
ButterflyGirl89 chapter 2 . 2/20/2008
ohh, its getting really good now. please post more soon. X
demonchilde chapter 2 . 2/20/2008
Every time someone else speaks you should make a new paragraph.
angelgirl88 chapter 2 . 2/20/2008
aww man right when i was really getting into it lol. any great chapter keep updating.
onetreefan chapter 1 . 2/20/2008
oh... this is so good. i know it may be soon in pop culture to title your story this, but THE JOKER sounds really good... :D

EO!

onetreefan
pIecE Of dA PUZzle chapter 1 . 2/19/2008
Heyy bayybee...

i dnt understand the story..

at the start they were tlkin bout a rape victim annd now you are talkin bout a complete different thing...grafitti. It is too misunderstandable in my point of view...But with the wholr slice thing that was good...maybe you should call it SLICE AND DICE...

HAHAHAHA

luv you alwayz

ps:IM CHANGIN MY NAME
Marie2185 chapter 1 . 2/19/2008
that was good please update soon
ButterflyGirl89 chapter 1 . 2/19/2008
wow this is a great start. I love it, what a great cliff hanger of an ending. Please update soon. X
girlfic chapter 1 . 2/19/2008
Okay totally intrigued! I can't wait for more! you Rock!

Deb
pinkydog123 chapter 1 . 2/19/2008
that was good _

try to get the next chapter up
angelgirl88 chapter 1 . 2/19/2008
great start keep updating
faith55 chapter 1 . 2/19/2008
omg good one

i can t wait for the next part

good job

see ya hope soon

thank s for sharing

lya