I don't normally care for Hermione/Snape pairings, but this was beautiful.

This was quite a sweet story, it was a little more sappy then I normally read. I'm usually more into ones where Hermione has a more dominant side. Anyways, great job!

I've really enjoyed the story so far! I was going to wait to the end to review, and I know I'm just one chapter away, but I just had to stop here and say something. While you are a brilliant writer, I find it difficult to believe Hermione would be suck a weak fighter. And I'm so sad to see Draco killed! And it was over Ron who was a jerk the whole story, not worth it! Anyways, I will still read on, because despite those little things, it is quite good.

love it

What an entry!

Hey!

I can't tell you enough how much I absolutely LOVE this fic! It had been a while since I've read fanfiction, and especially really good ones. This was a great find, and I hope you keep being this awesome. :D

Keep up the good work and don't stop writing! D

Wow, I loved this story I was glad to have a breath of fresh air and that it actually was a plot and not just a romance story :)

Your story is one of the best. I loved it! Thanks for sharing.

Great Chapter!

Okay... a little nitpicker in my is shouting.

The silence that hung in the room was deafening. Eventually, Sean scrambled to his feet, quickly taking his wand from Hermione, and he and his CABAL hurried out of the room without turning around to grab their bags.

A "cabal" is a secret group, usually conspiring against or for something. This group is clear and honest about what they want done- prove that the inhabitants of Hogwarts have pathetic defense skills. This is the wrong word for the group.

I don't mean to offend you- on the contrary. I am really enjoying this so far.

Okay... on to the next chapter.

Ausland

Wow! Interesting start. I love this pairing, and I can't wait to see what you do with it.

I'll keep reading, but I can't promise to review every time...

But I'm interested.

Ausland

this . . . . is . . . . ADORABLE! i'm absolutely in love with this story! it's amazingly sweet and light while still having a bad guy to defeat in the background~ Hermione got injured a bit too often in my opinion but it all worked out i s'pose .

and ending the story in the same way you started it, that was just cute and a nice touch in my opinion~

I like the way you round this off, ending as you began. A very nice, well told, tale which doesn't ignore Snape's canon feelings. LB

What a moving story. I must admit I cried a bit at Draco's funeral. Great job'

AWWWWWWWWW... This was such a sweet, well-written story. I heartily enjoyed it, and thank you so much for writing it.

Beautiful story. I like it very much.