This is my first review why the heck do you keep doing these cliffies..I swear if I was so behind I would cry...

Why "Kobic"... :D

Kelic is like "colic" :D How did you choose the owl's name though? :D

There were a couple of times when you used "it's" rather than the correct "its" in this FF. Did you get this betaed?

Love the way you set this chapter up... :D Liked the first half better though.. it was smoother! :D

I read from the reviews that you had spelling errors,.. the first two chaps look perfectly good! :D TBH, I prefer the writing in the first chapter though. :D The 2nd was a little too maudlin.

This is an absolutely amazing story, and I was hoping you may have a sequel in the future..? } Just thought you ought to know. *fake faints so I can sneak away when... I mean what* Happy fanfic-ing!

Henri

It's hypocrisy not hypocracy
And there were some blatant, and I do mean really obvious, spelling errors :-(
Thought was kinda abrupt and rushed... but a lovely tale nevertheless :) well done!

Well, there could be slight improvement in your rammer and vocabulary, especially with homonyms like quiet and quite, and some more
But the plot is thoroughly engaging :-)

I liked it - well done :)

Oh how this story makes me sigh.

I so enjoy this story. It's full of such wistfulness and quiet beauty.

Oh golly, after effects from crucio has to be fannon by now, I don't think you're borrowing.

Intense!

Honestly it looks great I'm always in the mood for some more adventure and I'm sure a lot of other Harry Potter fans are too. I'm really looking forward to the rest of the short story of yours