|Reviews for Love's escaping servitude|
| raises eyebrow chapter 15 . 1/24
The plot to this story is not right. First off, Bella is a FUCKING NEWBORN, she could have killed James in a heart beat. Second of all, per Stephanie Meyer vampires can only have ONE TRUE MATE, therefore Bella could not have been James' mate. Your plot has so many holes it's not even funny.
| darkangel0212 chapter 1 . 12/9/2011
good work on your stories
| darkangel0212 chapter 2 . 10/28/2010
keep up the good work
| Uya chapter 15 . 1/21/2010
Great fic & I love how Ed was So sweet to Bella
but you did have a few spelling errors
| Peaceful Dragon Rose chapter 14 . 12/4/2009
| x.Safety.Pins.x chapter 9 . 6/15/2009
Yup! I said
Pretty much! Edward added
| x.Safety.Pins.x chapter 2 . 6/15/2009
I HATE JAMES SO BADLY!
MAKE ME INTO THE STORY SO I CAN BEAT THE SHIT OUT OF HIM THEN WERE HIS INTESTINES AS A BELT!
(mental pictures ;))
| HangTogetherOrHangSeperate chapter 6 . 12/4/2008
THE FIRST PART KINDA SCARED ME, BUT I LIKE THE REST! REALLY GOOD!
| Giselita chapter 3 . 9/6/2008
Wow...and I mean...wow...
moving fast aren't we?
I really think this is a great, brilliant ideas...but you should take the things calmly...let every thing hsd it's time...just my advice...because I truly believe that this story could be much mucho better than it is
| Giselita chapter 1 . 9/6/2008
but too short and too many changes of povs...unnecesarely..
| Hopeful Cullen chapter 15 . 8/11/2008
| KeyLime422 chapter 10 . 8/10/2008
Oh I love how you started to include Jacob by making him and Bella childhood friends, and I can definately see him reacting that way! lol
| jane chapter 14 . 7/15/2008
well all i have to say congrats on your first finished story and it was really good i love your writing style hope you continue to make more stories good luck with that and maybe evena sequel to this one.
| Kikai NekoChan chapter 7 . 7/9/2008
:) I love it! Its so romantic, and sweet!
| edwardrocksmysocks chapter 14 . 6/1/2008
Congrats on finishing your story! It was so much fun to read! I'm looking forward to what you will come up with next! Keep writing!