Reviews for Hiruseki Niiro
pApAw chapter 1 . 3/15/2008
though their brother and sister..actually TWINS..i always imagine that yukina will fall for hiei...though its bad but i like them both together and i dont know why..its kinda creepy..but i like it

well anyways..

i like how you portrayed it here

one more thing. though i dont like the idea of both of them being twins..i actually want them together though its not pleasing to see..the only siblings that i wanted to be together is yukina and hiei and no one else...well..i just wanna share that

keep up the good work

love it

InsertManiacLaughterHere chapter 1 . 2/27/2008
Wow... That's all I can say; wow. This is probably the best one shot I've read... really, really good job.
Symphonic Fantasia chapter 1 . 2/22/2008
I really liked it but there was two problems that...I don't know:

1. If you don't remember, demons heart don't beat but either way it was still good 3 I don't think it wouldn't be half as great as what I just read

2. why would he kiss his own sister on the lips?

Either way it was still good! If I could rank you I'd give you a 12/10 XD

Keep up the good work
Proxima Shining chapter 1 . 2/21/2008
Simply wonderful.
Anei chapter 1 . 2/19/2008
Huf... I hadn't even noticed I was holding my breath through most of the fict. Maybe it was the lack of air that made my eyes water? :) LOL. I too, have thought that was the perfect thing to do. With out words, only actions. :) Very nice :)