|Reviews for Goodbyes are always Hard|
| KatnissandPrimWeasley chapter 1 . 11/12/2012
One thing you could improve in your writing is that you need to show, not tell. You are very blunt when you write, saying "George missed Fred" instead of "the pain of losing his twin was hard to deal with, and all he wanted was to see him again..." If you just elaborate on these parts, your story will have more depth.
| YsrilaN chapter 1 . 7/16/2012
I can't get the idea of George talking to a sock puppet out of my head now...
| Wolfstorm7 chapter 1 . 9/12/2009
Great one-shot. I actually like the ending.
| cherrybloo chapter 1 . 4/6/2008
aw poor george! good story :)
| Cap'n Scurvy Gums chapter 1 . 3/6/2008
Good start, but you should have ended it where George died. The Kings Cross part kind of killed it. And, Kings Cross isn't like Heaven for Wizards, remember, Dumbledore told Harry that he chose that place subconciously.
| Nightsnake chapter 1 . 2/27/2008
I didn't quite like the way you killed George. It just seemed too...abrupt.
| Wateronthebrain chapter 1 . 2/23/2008
oh! the ending was so sweet!
I interpreted the Kings Cross station as a kind of gateway between the two worlds for Harry, and haven't seen it used for any of the other characters. That's cool that you did that!
| FrednGeorgeFanGirl chapter 1 . 2/19/2008
this was good, i liked it.