There's nothing like a good Trek spoof! You've got great comedic timing! Great job doing characters' voices - made characters' faces appear before my inner eye from way back while reading! Spot on with the Doctor etc. "This ship is built to last", huh? :-D

Hilarious stage actions.;D Awesome for your first time writing a script. J/C was very cute, even though I would've loved a little more D/7. _~;; Overall great!

Loved the story.. even if I did wish there where more D/7. I thought certain parts were eg. about tuvok being captains pet. I was woundering If you've ever written a parody or thought about writing one I'm just asking because I think you have the ability to write a good one.

Great story-I loved every part of it, and I'd love to see it continued!

I was just reading this again for like the 8th time, and I suddenly realized I never left a real review, so here it is: Cute cute cute! I love the J/C part right at the end, its very in-character. You've got fabulous talent, so keep it up!

Quit being so hard on yourself. I think it's a decent first try. It has some funny scenes. And I particularly liked your opinions which were thrown in, here and there, for good measure.

That was FANTASTIC! I loved it.