|Reviews for A rite of passage|
| ReaderKat chapter 16 . 7/7/2013
Enjoyed your story, about gave me a heart attack with all the unprotected sex, but you worked it out in a very real and heartfelt way that brought tears to my eyes. I look forward to your sequel. Thanks for sharing!
| RosaScarcela chapter 1 . 3/24/2013
| annaharding chapter 15 . 3/23/2013
OK - dalloway said she had a lot of good fics to recommend on her site, so i looked and there yours was. The first (only) one I read. Enjoyed this so much. Now I'm off to read your other two.
Thanx for the reading entertainment!
| The-Kelli-Rose chapter 16 . 3/7/2013
This is one of the most amazing stories I have read in a long, long time. How can it be I just found it! I am going on 2 hours of sleep in the last 2 days - I just couldn't stop reading this along with The Way Back. Just everything about them. At times I wanted to shake them for being so silly but in the end, it worked out. I don't think I could have read this version of your Bella & Edward another way.z your story, characters, plot & writing are beyond talented. Thank you for sharing it & I really hope you continue to write others at some point. Kelli
| Marijee chapter 2 . 2/1/2013
Puppy piles...Bella and Edward sleeping together.
| Dil9 chapter 15 . 1/20/2013
Loved it:). Thanks for sharing:)
| Dil9 chapter 11 . 1/20/2013
Oh my god!:)
| Dil9 chapter 7 . 1/20/2013
Oh his woman wow
| Dil9 chapter 3 . 1/20/2013
Aww so sweet:)
| MadKyzz chapter 15 . 1/7/2013
This is definitely one of my all time favorites! It's an amazing story, fantastic writing and really adorable characters!
| Hazeldene chapter 15 . 1/7/2013
I love this story, it is a real gem. A true rough diamond. If you can see past the literally hundreds of grammatical, spelling, awkward word sequences, incorrect pronouns and punctuation errors, it is a beautiful story. It is quirky and edgy and sad and fun. I suspect the majority of the problems with this story are due to it having been translated from another language.
I have made myself an edited copy without all the mistakes, and it is a great story, one of my favourites. If anyone reading this knows the author, ask her to contact me. It seems to have been years since she updated her profile.
This story deserves greater recognition, it is really special, and very different to any other I have read.
| Hazeldene chapter 16 . 1/1/2013
I read and enjoyed this story,it was different, and well written.
| grandn chapter 15 . 12/28/2012
Beautiful story. Thoughtfully handled. Thank you for writing.
| KellyO1026 chapter 16 . 10/1/2012
Ok, this is my first Twilight fanfic. I have been reading hunger games fan fics and I came across this. I loved it. I loved the AU theme. I loved that they were so OOC. You did a fantastic job writing this. I liked that it didn't come easy for them and that they had a few twists in their path. Your writing was wonderful. I'm on to the sequel.
| silton chapter 14 . 9/19/2012
"You always say that you have no flesh and blood attachment anywhere… You can't say that anymore... It was also my blood you bled."
Like Bella - I have no words...I'm supposed to be working, but I cant stop reading, and now I'm all teary eyed sitting at my desk.