Reviews for A rite of passage |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Such an excellent story, i'm sorry to see it end. I'm looking forward to reading the sequel though. |
![]() ![]() ![]() What a heartbreakingly sad chapter. I cried so hard for Esme and Bella. I'm glad Bella and Edward were able to talk things out as well. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I don't think of you as a baby killer. I understand you probably had an outline and you're just following it. It doesn't make you horrible. Very emotional and sad chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh how sad. I can't imagine loosing a baby. Poor Edward and Bella. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww that was so sweet of Edward to stick up for Bella like that. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Gasp! I hope she's not pregnant. |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG so did not see this coming. Such an emotional chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww they're starting to realize their feelings for one another. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Poor Bella is all confused. Great chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Their banter is so cute. Excellent chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love that they aren't all awkward the night after. Really shows what a strong friendship they have. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Such a sweet chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Edward and Bella are so cute. I love that they have such a strong relationship starting off. Great chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This sounds like an interesting story. Looking forward to reading. |
![]() ![]() ![]() great story, off to read the sequel now. thanks Kirstie |