Reviews for A rite of passage
Rochelle88 chapter 15 . 1/27/2010
Such an excellent story, i'm sorry to see it end. I'm looking forward to reading the sequel though.
Rochelle88 chapter 14 . 1/27/2010
What a heartbreakingly sad chapter. I cried so hard for Esme and Bella. I'm glad Bella and Edward were able to talk things out as well.
Rochelle88 chapter 13 . 1/27/2010
I don't think of you as a baby killer. I understand you probably had an outline and you're just following it. It doesn't make you horrible. Very emotional and sad chapter.
Rochelle88 chapter 12 . 1/27/2010
Oh how sad. I can't imagine loosing a baby. Poor Edward and Bella.
Rochelle88 chapter 11 . 1/27/2010
Aww that was so sweet of Edward to stick up for Bella like that.
Rochelle88 chapter 9 . 1/27/2010
Gasp! I hope she's not pregnant.
Rochelle88 chapter 10 . 1/27/2010
OMG so did not see this coming. Such an emotional chapter.
Rochelle88 chapter 7 . 1/27/2010
Aww they're starting to realize their feelings for one another.
Rochelle88 chapter 6 . 1/27/2010
Poor Bella is all confused. Great chapter.
Rochelle88 chapter 5 . 1/27/2010
Their banter is so cute. Excellent chapter.
Rochelle88 chapter 4 . 1/27/2010
I love that they aren't all awkward the night after. Really shows what a strong friendship they have.
Rochelle88 chapter 3 . 1/27/2010
Such a sweet chapter.
Rochelle88 chapter 2 . 1/27/2010
Edward and Bella are so cute. I love that they have such a strong relationship starting off. Great chapter.
Rochelle88 chapter 1 . 1/27/2010
This sounds like an interesting story. Looking forward to reading.
latour chapter 15 . 1/25/2010
great story, off to read the sequel now.

thanks

Kirstie
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