| Reviews for A rite of passage |
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   nonexisting-account-deleted chapter 5 . 5/31/2014 Hmm, things are changing, love it. Good job. |
| nonexisting-account-deleted chapter 2 . 5/31/2014 I like the way this flows. Bella's a great character and I'm pleased that this is juvenile yet serious. I look forward to seeing the development. |
| Guest chapter 11 . 4/1/2014 Did you hear that? It was my heat heat beating frantically. |
| ReaderKat chapter 16 . 7/7/2013 Enjoyed your story, about gave me a heart attack with all the unprotected sex, but you worked it out in a very real and heartfelt way that brought tears to my eyes. I look forward to your sequel. Thanks for sharing! |
| RosaScarcela chapter 1 . 3/24/2013 Perfect! |
| annaharding chapter 15 . 3/23/2013 OK - dalloway said she had a lot of good fics to recommend on her site, so i looked and there yours was. The first (only) one I read. Enjoyed this so much. Now I'm off to read your other two. Thanx for the reading entertainment! |
| KRC28 chapter 16 . 3/7/2013 This is one of the most amazing stories I have read in a long, long time. How can it be I just found it! I am going on 2 hours of sleep in the last 2 days - I just couldn't stop reading this along with The Way Back. Just everything about them. At times I wanted to shake them for being so silly but in the end, it worked out. I don't think I could have read this version of your Bella & Edward another way.z your story, characters, plot & writing are beyond talented. Thank you for sharing it & I really hope you continue to write others at some point. Kelli |
| marigold123 chapter 2 . 2/1/2013 Puppy piles...Bella and Edward sleeping together. |
| Dil9 chapter 15 . 1/20/2013 Loved it:). Thanks for sharing:) |
| Dil9 chapter 11 . 1/20/2013 Oh my god!:) |
| Dil9 chapter 7 . 1/20/2013 Oh his woman wow |
| Dil9 chapter 3 . 1/20/2013 Aww so sweet:) |
| MadKyzz chapter 15 . 1/7/2013 This is definitely one of my all time favorites! It's an amazing story, fantastic writing and really adorable characters! |
| Hazeldene chapter 15 . 1/7/2013 Hi, I love this story, it is a real gem. A true rough diamond. If you can see past the literally hundreds of grammatical, spelling, awkward word sequences, incorrect pronouns and punctuation errors, it is a beautiful story. It is quirky and edgy and sad and fun. I suspect the majority of the problems with this story are due to it having been translated from another language. I have made myself an edited copy without all the mistakes, and it is a great story, one of my favourites. If anyone reading this knows the author, ask her to contact me. It seems to have been years since she updated her profile. This story deserves greater recognition, it is really special, and very different to any other I have read. |
| Hazeldene chapter 16 . 1/1/2013 Hi I read and enjoyed this story,it was different, and well written. |