Beautiful story. Thoughtfully handled. Thank you for writing.

Ok, this is my first Twilight fanfic. I have been reading hunger games fan fics and I came across this. I loved it. I loved the AU theme. I loved that they were so OOC. You did a fantastic job writing this. I liked that it didn't come easy for them and that they had a few twists in their path. Your writing was wonderful. I'm on to the sequel.

"You always say that you have no flesh and blood attachment anywhere… You can't say that anymore... It was also my blood you bled."

Like Bella - I have no words...I'm supposed to be working, but I cant stop reading, and now I'm all teary eyed sitting at my desk.

Ohhh, I was so waiting for this...so thank you!

"You didn't like them looking at your little sister that way?"

"No Bella... I didn't like them looking at my woman that way."

Glad you obviously decided to go ahead with the sequel. Looking forward to reading it, thanks.

I'm glad she finally let it out. These two seem to be a great couple. I hope they make it.

I hope they come out of this okay.

I hope she isn't.

So are they declaring each other now? Just found this on the lemonade stand, looking great so far. Love their dynamic but I get the feeling it's about to change.

Great story about friendship, loss of innocence, loss, and finally love. Esme's story was heart breaking. I look forward to now reading the sequel.

so sweet! love it ALL :DD

amaaaaando demais essa fic, linda! :')

ai god.. me senti mal com a perda do baby dos dois, eu pensei que ia dar certo ):

ADOREI ESTE CAPITULO, só o final que foi sofrível, mas estamos juntos

owwwwwwwwwwn, tão lindo! :DD