Reviews for A rite of passage |
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![]() ![]() ![]() awwn, que diferente. agora é saber o desenrolar disso tudo, estou surpresa! |
![]() ![]() ![]() omgg estou em choque! |
![]() ![]() ![]() quero saber no que isso vai dar.. |
![]() ![]() ![]() omggg |
![]() ![]() ![]() as coisas não estão mais tão fáceis como eram... amando |
![]() ![]() ![]() amando.. |
![]() ![]() ![]() que lindo! |
![]() ![]() ![]() eles de uma maneira diferente, são tão fofos! |
![]() ![]() ![]() irei ler ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved this story and hope you write a sequel |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh wowww very good fanfic so different I mean all the ones I have read contains romance in some form but your fanfic was very different it felt like we are reading real life love story u knw anyways I loved your bella in this hehe she is very sarcastic and funny n very Tom boy types hehe and I loved edwella relationship just wow. And aww it was sad wen Bella lost her baby even Edward cried aww the emotions u wrote perfectly. And also I loved when Edward wore a t-shirt to tell Dat Bella is wid him n he is her child father aww. Anyways now gonna read the sequel hehe. |
![]() ![]() This chapter is wonderful! It so accurately portrays something that I feel like could've gone on in my own head in high school, which seems rare in twilight fics. Great job :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I LOVE EDWARD! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really enjoyed your style of story-telling. I hope to read many more in the future! |