| Reviews for A rite of passage |
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   evilnat chapter 15 . 1/1/2012 Such a beautiful story. Well developed and written well. Loved the banter between Edward and Bella. And loved how realistic it was. Took me back to my high school years. (though I never lived with a hot step brother!) Xx |
| Jaygm chapter 15 . 11/13/2011 This was an awesomely, sweet story. A very quick read and very well done. These two really have a solid foundation for a lasting relationship- deep friendship. |
| kanskjeidag chapter 15 . 11/6/2011 This Bella blew me away - I loved her sarcasm and bluntness. I laughed so much reading and that is no easy feat to achieve. Furthermore, I believed this Bella. She felt real to me and the close bond with Edward made me jealous. I admire the way you addressed her pregnancy and Edward's way of reassuring her he is in with her by writing that on his shirt was brilliant. I loved Bella's portrayal and the end was good. Thanks for sharing. |
| sakuragirl7 chapter 15 . 10/2/2011 Excellent story. I can't remember how I found your fic but so glad I did. I can't believe you did such an excellent job in such a short fic! Two thumbs up! |
| sakuragirl7 chapter 14 . 10/2/2011 :( so beautifully written :( reminds me of things I hadn't thought about in a long time. |
| sakuragirl7 chapter 11 . 10/2/2011 Awwww :) |
| sakuragirl7 chapter 10 . 10/2/2011 sniff sniff... |
| sakuragirl7 chapter 3 . 10/2/2011 Awwww. So sweet :) |
| shelllynn22 chapter 16 . 9/23/2011 Wow, very powerful story. having had 2 mc's myself granted after married it is easy to understand with the other baggage closing off and having to grieve in her own time, we all grieve differently.I am glad the story took that turn cuz people don't realize sometimes even if you have a mc your life is still changes in a big way by a I can't wait to read the sequel! |
| Soniya chapter 14 . 9/10/2011 heartfelt chapter...I really cried like a baby!Ironic..huh? you should write more..please! |
| arocha21 chapter 15 . 9/7/2011 Oh my god, this is just... I can't eve... I have no words for this, really, why haven't you published a book, or have you? if so, please tell me so I can buy it, God this is just so amazingly well written. |
| Edwardian-Rosebud chapter 1 . 8/31/2011 Great so far. |
| Rheka chapter 15 . 8/9/2011 I really enjoyed reading your story .I liked your OOC Bella a lot :-). Thx for sharing |
| Dulcinea21bella chapter 14 . 7/25/2011 I'm happy they are finally talking. |
| Dulcinea21bella chapter 12 . 7/25/2011 I didn't know that about the bruising.. interesting. I feel badly for them, but it may be better in teh long run. THey have have children when they are ready. |