| Reviews for A rite of passage |
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   Dulcinea21bella chapter 11 . 7/25/2011 Ah. I LOVED this chapter! |
| Dulcinea21bella chapter 10 . 7/25/2011 Wow. Great twist. |
| Dulcinea21bella chapter 7 . 7/24/2011 Ahhhh. LOVE that last line! |
| Dulcinea21bella chapter 6 . 7/24/2011 SHe is in over her head now... |
| Dulcinea21bella chapter 3 . 7/24/2011 I like it! |
| Dulcinea21bella chapter 1 . 7/24/2011 I am intrigued! |
| Twi-Lin chapter 15 . 7/10/2011 I read your story a while back and reread today. It is such a delightful story. Thanks for sharing it with us! I'm going to start on the sequel. :) |
| robsessed1123 chapter 11 . 7/8/2011 gah! that waz freakin adorable! swooned! thx bb |
| Ellachanted chapter 16 . 6/27/2011 I finally got around to reading this. I thought it was a really good story. Maybe a little to the point, but it worked. You can get away with a lot less details in fanfic as we kind of know the characters. A beta would probably be good. There were a lot of typos. I also find a consistent misuse of words throughout fanfic, so not just you. Such as we lied down instead of we laid down. As I said, pretty much every story I read misuses that. I only mention it to you because your bio sounds like you want to write your own stories. But overall great job. I hope you write more. Now I'm off to read the other 2 stories. |
| asiula chapter 15 . 6/19/2011 I really enjoyed reading this! :) Thank you :) |
| bellasmum chapter 11 . 6/17/2011 I totally fist pumped after reading this chapter. I can see Juno's character when I read Bella's dialog :). I cannot wait to see how everything ends. This story was rec'ed from FB twilight fanfic recommendations. |
| janosch73 chapter 16 . 6/14/2011 I can't understand why you don't have more reviews as I loved your story. Your writing flows very nicely and I like the banter between Edward and Bella a lot. A very nice quick read! |
| nello25 chapter 15 . 6/2/2011 beautiful story, beautifully written, i dont even mind the miscarriage, i get it. on to the sequel now. |
| edwardschewtoy1 chapter 15 . 5/28/2011 This was very good. |
| edwardschewtoy1 chapter 11 . 5/28/2011 I love an Edward in charge |