Reviews for A rite of passage
Ruby-Wednesday chapter 1 . 2/22/2008
wow, i really like this story. its so original and there's something very realistic about it! i just saw Juno so as soon as i saw you mention it in the intro. the story caught my eye.

update soon!
freeatlas chapter 6 . 2/22/2008
The plot thickens . . . I'll be watching for updates!
Simply Fantastic chapter 6 . 2/22/2008
update soon :]
EC4me chapter 6 . 2/22/2008
Great story. I love the banter between Edward and Bella.
Katchelle87 chapter 6 . 2/22/2008
This is very good!
EdwardsKitten chapter 6 . 2/22/2008
I would love to see a jealous Edward...jealous of any male attention Bella may get. Jealous guys are hot.
A Shy Loner chapter 6 . 2/22/2008
this is a really good fanfic!

im glad u wrote it! XD
eclipselover chapter 5 . 2/22/2008
I like the banter between them
eclipselover chapter 6 . 2/22/2008
I just found this story . I really like it! Please update soon
iheartkaiserchiefs chapter 6 . 2/22/2008
i hope edward doesnt get offended by bella asking him to leave-:(. that would be sad. well, good chappie, as expected. to me it seems eddie is a bit jealus of "bella and chad"...haha. maybe their experimenting is getting to the best of him. i cant wait for the frat party, i have got a feeling something is gonna happen. thanks for the update, and jolly good day!
I like men with no men boobs chapter 6 . 2/22/2008
i like your story and this chapter, update soon please
WeasleyWeakness chapter 6 . 2/22/2008
I don't mind that you're bastardizing it.

Edward and Bella make me happy as do Bleeker and Juno.

I love that Bella has Juno's spark!

You're story is very creative and different.

Keep it up!
edwardandbellabelong2gether chapter 1 . 2/22/2008
A story of this from Edward's point of view would be AWESOME!
Numbiture chapter 6 . 2/22/2008
I love your story and that was a great chapter.

I really like the sense of humor they both have, and the way they go back and forth. awesome job. they actually seem really real in my mind.
CHEEKYCHIN chapter 6 . 2/22/2008
oh wow. keep writing .

How queer.

they should definitely progress in their relationship, whatever that may be.

:)
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