Reviews for Eclipse
Zeki Young chapter 1 . 5/18/2011
so very cute! Love it when you get in Jack's head!
EwigeStudentin chapter 1 . 12/13/2009
I loved this little fic. Didn't expect it to end like this and I am happy that it did. Thank you for sharing!
polrobin chapter 1 . 6/3/2009
Oh...oh.

Wow.
JenniferJF chapter 1 . 8/23/2008
Oh, that's beautiful. And wonderful imagery, too. :) - Jen
annamw15 chapter 1 . 7/14/2008
Sigh. Beautiful, absolutely beautiful.
Knight of Avalon chapter 1 . 3/3/2008
Absolutely amazing. I'm Favoriting it right now!

"It was almost like bringing her home."

She's comin' home, Jack. Ya don't have to wait much longer.
BettyHall223 chapter 1 . 2/25/2008
How very sweet.
BrenRenQoI chapter 1 . 2/23/2008
Aw... very sweet! Loved the visual imagery in this one!
getcarter chapter 1 . 2/23/2008
Oh lord that was full of sappy goodness. I loved this!
LadyMo chapter 1 . 2/22/2008
Ah, so sweet, I feel for him.

:-)
PodBayDoors chapter 1 . 2/21/2008
Oh, my poor broken heart!

Very sweet.

VSS
MuseUrania chapter 1 . 2/21/2008
Sweet.
Bucky4 chapter 1 . 2/21/2008
Really nice. Really sad.
sheenabeena chapter 1 . 2/21/2008
Well done! Very well described- the cold and the quiet especially... *looks depressedly out the window at the ice and snow*

I especially liked the use of repetition- enough so that there was a certain rhythm to the story, but not so many as to reduce effectiveness and become annoying.

Thumbs up!
Zoser chapter 1 . 2/21/2008
So bittersweet. Hope Jack and Sam get together after her stint on Atlantis.
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