Reviews for Serendipity
EdwardAnthony chapter 4 . 2/24/2008
i really really like this story , plz keep writing
Night script chapter 4 . 2/24/2008
like this story a lot... It is going to be a big surprise when Edward and Bela find out they will be going out together... lol
irishgirl32 chapter 4 . 2/24/2008
I am so glad I came across this story it seems wonderful and i cant wiat to read more!
Apple Slushie chapter 1 . 2/24/2008
interesting start. dont know what else to say.

... I'll review when i've read the next chapter
Girlz-Rule chapter 4 . 2/23/2008
great new chapter, update soon:D
Santi911 chapter 4 . 2/23/2008
I LOVE this tory so far!

It's very nicely written.

Update SOON!

~santi911/ Claire
Catt Phan chapter 4 . 2/23/2008
I really like your story! It's so interesting to see how Bella and Edward's romance would be like if he was human. I'm excited to read to fourth chapter and more! (I f there are any, which I do hope there will be!) Keep up the awesome work
Lenny chapter 3 . 2/23/2008
WHEN IS THE NEXT CHAPTER COMING OUT? Soon, I hope!
Emma O'Leary chapter 4 . 2/23/2008
mike is such an asshole! and then theres bella who doesnt realize how edward is very interested in her! what exactly does she think sunday is?
freeatlas chapter 4 . 2/23/2008
The plot thickens . . . you keep writing, I'll keep reading.
XxCocoLovexX chapter 4 . 2/23/2008
ha ha i loved it! oh! lol i cant wait for the next chapter! please update soon!
crzybookluvrchick4017 chapter 4 . 2/23/2008
for some reason i just love all your stories. so get used to it
MyBella chapter 4 . 2/23/2008
Can't wait to see the date! Yeah!

That whole kissing her hand and leave her a post-it! Too cute! keep it up!
All.The.RageR chapter 3 . 2/23/2008
i love it
AndThereWasLight chapter 3 . 2/23/2008
Good story! And I don't really have any fantastic constructive criticism, but I like your writing style; the story flows well and it doesn't seem forced. Keep it up!
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