|Reviews for The Shot Heard Around the World|
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/22
So, just an fyi, you often use "excepted" when what you should be using is "accepted" ,two different meanings there. I've read several of your stories, and liked them all, but that word error is in every one so far. Oh well, now off to read the rest of this one.
| S.Warrior chapter 18 . 1/15
So Tyson is Kim and Shego's son? If not how in the hell does he have her eyes and powers? Im guessing hes pissed at Kim for leaving his "dad" Ron and wants revenge but it looks like Ron stayed to take care of tyson so why is he so bitter enough to destroy his mom smh what could kim have done to piss him off so bad that would warrant her death or make him this evil smh i need answers i hope you finish this because it is amazing and i read it alll in like 4hrs lol
| Danwolfknigth chapter 18 . 1/10
OMG! You need to continue this story! It's just amazing and really... envolvente (sorry I don't remember the English word for it) I love this story and I really hope that you don't just leave it incomplete. Once again, I am fascinated with your writing, I read your stories and I love all of them
| Hewhoislost chapter 18 . 12/2/2015
You have a hell of a story here. The F.O.G. device alone could spin off to a bunch of fics. I can't wait for an update.
| Amateraszu chapter 18 . 8/29/2015
so far its really awesome and inspiring reading your story
i hope you will post next arc soon to ease our suffering :o
| Anna-Link Hearts chapter 18 . 4/22/2015
Omg. What. This is the end?
I am so sad...this was getting incredibly good.
| theatrelesbian chapter 18 . 4/21/2015
Her kids are trying to kill her just because she got divorced? Oh my god what? Wait.. Why does he have shego's eyes?
| KuroUnchi chapter 1 . 11/12/2014
Ms/Mr. Intrivertedtiger, you must update this. Please write the second arc, 'A Grim Day in Hell'
This is one of the greatest KiGo fics ive read by far...I found myself surprised in reviewing this...lol... Even though it's been five years since the last update, I couldn't help but ask again xD
If you are unable to...I guess I'll have to stick with my imagination huh? XD
| xxDark Angel Babyxx chapter 18 . 11/6/2014
I have no idea if you plan on continuing this story! I really hope you do. It's amazing and I can't wait to read more!
| Guest chapter 18 . 10/15/2014
Oh, and, as for your profile message.
I do not think that makes your a pervert.
As I Myself am a gal who gets mushy seeing two girls in love. (Or two guys. I am easy, as long as it's gay love. :) I get enough straight romance shit shoved in My face daily to ever like it.)
| Guest chapter 18 . 10/15/2014
Awwwww, MAAAAAAN. :( One of the BEST in the fandom Kigo ficcies, by one of the BEST Kigo authors in the fandom...
I think I may just cry into My pillow tonight that this STILL, and probably NEVER IS going to be, isn't finished.
| jono14 chapter 18 . 8/31/2014
It's only been 5 years since the last update. Still worth asking for a few more chapters? :)?
| Vega Tenala chapter 18 . 8/16/2014
Okay, you really need to update. I'm curious about Tyson, where did he get plasma powers? Where does he come from? What is he doing on this earth? Did he travel in time or come from an AU?
What's the connection between Mark and Grim? There is definitely a connection between the two. Are they a split personality? Or something more?
So many questions, so need an update!
| dennygale chapter 18 . 7/14/2014
I just came upon this story and read the entire thing in one sitting, why did you stop writing it, it's one of the best I've read in a LONG time, really hope you find the time to finish it off
| lesbinope chapter 17 . 5/9/2014
Oh! Here are my thoughts: Grim is Mark or Jacques is Mark or they're sort of the same person but some FOG thing made Mark evil so they separated him into two people, one good and one evil. God, I can understand Mark with that insta-love thing because Shego is just that hot but really I feel like he could have been more perceptive about Kim and Shego's feelings for each other. Kim WAS the first thing Shego asked for and with her pet name and Kim's touchy behavior with Shego didn't seem threatening, just kind of needy.
Obv Tyson is somehow the genetic child of Kim and Shego from an alternate timeline in the future. Maybe done by some weird implant thing by Drakken (as in so many other Kigo fics) or the future lets women impregnate women. But that doesn't made as much sense since from what we've been shown so far, Kim and Shego only kissed before they got together (and after Tyson was born too!). Unless you're hiding some secret trysts in the subtext and that mistress content wasn't a joke.
So Tyson wants revenge? Hates his life enough that he wants his genetic parents to never get together so he'll never have to exist? Paradox of paradoxes. I mean he had heartbreak from his parents' divorce but god I know kids who have it so much worse and they don't become EVIL so something really bad must have happened to him.
DO YOU SEE? ALL OF THESE MIND CONSUMING QUESTIONS ARE ONLY THE TIPPITY TOP OF THE GOD DAMN ICE BERG OF MY CURIOSITY AND I AM A CAT. I am dying here, good sir, and I wish you would relieve my suffering.