Reviews for The Adventures of Team 7 in the Land of Beast
XxFlowerAngelxX chapter 14 . 2/21/2009
I'm glad that you'll be updateing soon, but I don't really understand the point of this plot. I think you should start adding a little more violence. Just a suggestion. Anyways, I luv the story!
RedandBlackTears chapter 13 . 6/17/2008
*evil smirk* wonder wat they will do?

Can hardly wait for the update to find out wat happens. ;]
sasusaku0129 chapter 13 . 6/17/2008
ah i want to know what they were doing
sasusaku0129 chapter 12 . 6/17/2008
what an interesting class
RedandBlackTears chapter 12 . 6/17/2008
LOL! naruto and yuki sensei are really alike XD

anyway good job
docterjoy chapter 1 . 5/13/2008
For starters, you need to spell check this. Most word processors have it. The story seems a little like a Naruto filler, you might want to spice it up a little and not use plot cliches. It is creative and you have a lot of potential, however. Check out some tutorials for fic newbies.
sasusaku0129 chapter 10 . 4/11/2008
nya i cant wait itll the next 1
blossomheartxoxo chapter 2 . 4/6/2008
interesting write more
RedandBlackTears chapter 9 . 4/6/2008
pretty good

do u rite chaps ahead of time and wait until u feel like ritin or do u start ritin the next chap after you update

cuz i think sakura should be really good at sumtin or has sumtin really special bout her an sasuke is kinda surprised bout it
sasusaku0129 chapter 9 . 4/6/2008
nya i cant wait till they actually get to school
RedandBlackTears chapter 8 . 3/31/2008
pretty good when will u update more
sasusaku0129 chapter 8 . 3/30/2008
nya awsome i cant wait till the next 1
Sofabox12 chapter 8 . 3/29/2008
COOL! I LOVE THIS! KEEP IT UP!- wow cant believe that ther is a 2 foot tall spider, kinda creeps me out O.O anyway good job!
RedandBlackTears chapter 7 . 3/25/2008
goin great

cant wait for more
denytheworld chapter 2 . 3/22/2008
Hey, from SOL lol.

It's pretty good, but please work on your spelling. You tend to forget the apostrophes 'your' instead of 'you're' and stuff like that.

And please add more text in between the dialogue.

Keep it up,! ~_~
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