Reviews for Cursed Family Of Old
Miss Obvious chapter 17 . 5/6
This is a good story and an interesting one, really, but there is a lot of grammar errors. Not that I'm complaining about it (cause if I did, I would never read this till the last chapter) so yeah please don't take this as an insult. Well thank you for writing this story
Guest chapter 17 . 5/3
that was beautiful. I'm crying over here man. Beautiful, beautiful
SapphireKageKyuura chapter 5 . 10/29/2015
There is too many grammar errors. dying is the correct spelling. Plan is the correct spelling, not plain. Plain is like talking about someone's fashion, or the taste of certain foods that are plain. I liked the story, but every time Kikyo was mention I just wanted her to die. I'm happy that Kagome is a demon now. And that the curse was broken, instead of becoming a human again she stayed a demon. Was she ever really human to begin with? Here's a tip. Before you post a chapter make sure all the spelling is correct. I'm not saying this to insult you or anything. Keep up the good work!
Undertheskys chapter 4 . 10/17/2015
Singing not signing
Undertheskys chapter 4 . 10/17/2015
its not attacked by her, its "Attracted to her"
Undertheskys chapter 2 . 10/17/2015
He wants her to smile
Myth Magyk Fae chapter 17 . 6/9/2015
Awwwww! They're so cute! I love the idea of a family curse changing her into a demon, just cool (:
Dagger-Seishin chapter 17 . 1/11/2015
lol she's probaly pregnant again knowing sesshomaru lol. good story rather cute.
Guest chapter 6 . 11/1/2014
Great chapter but some spelling errors haft should have been have
andrieleurbano chapter 17 . 9/5/2014
anfiction loved pretty much I love and kagome fanfiction with sesshomaru
apologize for any errors in english I am Brazilian and I used google
Congratulations fanfiction
BlackMagicRose7 chapter 17 . 7/1/2014
This was a great story, I just wish you would go back over it and fix all the mistakes.
lara5170 chapter 13 . 10/31/2013
This was a good chapter I liked how it showed Kagome running on instinct trying to get her pups but I don't understand why she still avoided Sessh & wouldn't go near him after she completely realized that it was Naraku all along. She was even able to purify the jewel shards.
lara5170 chapter 12 . 10/31/2013
I'm confused about a few things. If Kagome is a demon now shouldn't her senses be stronger & she be able to smell Sessh & the others? This has had me confused. When Sessh starting kissing & teasing Kagome, he was happy when he smelled how aroused she was just kissing him & I wondered why it hadn't mentioned any instance where Kagome could pick up on the scents of Sessh, Shippo, Rin or other things. In this chapter, when Naraku changed his appearance to look like Sessh I didn't understand how Kagome could be fooled by appearance, when even before the curse was broken she could sense the aura's of who was who. In Ch.2 when Kagome was able to tell that Sessh was behind her before turning around & Sessh asked her how she knew it was him. Another thing, when Kagome entered the fight between Sessh & Naraku, it mentioned Naraku wasn't aware that Kagome was a demon & he didn't know who she was when she entered the fight but when she looked like she was going to kill the real Sessh, it stated that Naraku was happy that Kagome was going to kill her own mate? If he didn't who she was then why'd it say he was happy she was going to kill her mate?
lara5170 chapter 2 . 10/31/2013
How can Inu be mated to Kikyo if she isn't really alive? Inu's have a strong sense of smell. So wouldn't that mean there is something seriously wrong with Inu's brain & would he likely be insane to be turned on sexually by the smell of a dead thing & be able to have sex with it. Isn't Kikyo's body basically drywall made out of cremated remains? Makes me wonder if he could he ever be with a living being.
lara5170 chapter 6 . 10/31/2013
Why do they have to return to Sessh & Kagome so soon (2 days)? It mentioned Inu going to Kagome's time for supplies but isn't the 'well' hidden & inaccessible for Inu? Before the curse was broken Kagome was still able to use miko powers even though she'd become a demon on her 18th b-day. Now that the curse has been broken & she's taken on the form of a demon, does she still have miko powers too? When the curse broke it said Kagome glowed a white & blue, lifted off the bed, markings appeared on her body (no mention of their color), her hair turned white & grew longer, she became taller (6' ?) & a fire colored star appeared on her forehead? I can't help wondering 3 things: 1-Are her eyes still blue? 2- 6' is tall for a woman but Sessh didn't seem fazed. I can only imagine it means he's much taller, how tall is he? 3- What type of demon did Kagome become ?
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