Reviews for Inner Demons
Ginger Glinda the Tangerine chapter 8 . 1/21/2009
:O You updated! :O Excellent.

This was amazing, as always.
TardisIsTheOnlyWayToTravel chapter 8 . 1/21/2009
Awesome. :)
TayliaNinja chapter 8 . 1/21/2009
Time to review chapter 8(:

I love the flashes of red eyes. Very good touch.

Man i'd love to see harry with read eyes.

Harry is getting more creepy. i love it.


I can't wait for an update m'dear.

you're a AMAZING writer, you know.

Please continue. (I'm begging)

Ohh. Blood on his hands?

I like, yes I like it
TayliaNinja chapter 6 . 1/21/2009
Heya hunny.(:

I'm reviewing chapter 6.


you better keep it going.

great job
TayliaNinja chapter 1 . 1/20/2009

I've only read the first chapter and i'm hooked.

You sure know how to end a chapter, my gosh.

RaineyDae chapter 7 . 1/20/2009
...sing through the valley of the night

it is the music of a people who are climbing to the light...

That song gives me goosbumps lol. In a good way. Poor Harry...
RaineyDae chapter 2 . 1/20/2009
Yeah, my fanfic is actually a bit like yours, AU with small diversion (The basalisk lands a bite on fawks while he's thrashing around blindly) but it starts out in the diary so I know what you mean about playing with your character's heads. I really like where this is going though... and don't like it, at the same time, but in a good way lol.
RaineyDae chapter 1 . 1/20/2009
It's good, I really do like it... you just had a one-eyed witch wink, that's all. lol or maybe she winks all the time, but still, bit puzzling.
FelicisFoe chapter 7 . 6/1/2008
Wow, haven't read this story in ages. I've been so caught up with exams. You're doing great. I love the flashes of red eyes - really creepy. I seems like every chapter he gets a little more like Voldemort. Can't wait to see what you've got in stall for him. Keep updating ;)
TheatreBrat chapter 7 . 4/21/2008
Awesome... Evil Harry is getting creepier. The red eyes are still freaky - and the way Harry moves when he's being all Dark Lord-y works really well.

"I - I don't know. Instinct?" Hee. I don't know if that line was meant to be funny or not, but it is. And if it isn't meant to be funny, that's still a compliment. :P

Although, it is interesting that Harry perceives the Dark Lord-iness as instinct - does that mean that if he relies on instinct in a fight, or to conceal himself or something, that he's giving Voldy an easy opportunity to take over? Or am I just reading far, far too much into this? Oh, and I didn't call him Voldy. Blame the sleep dep, dammit, blame the sleep dep.

The other Aurors have seen Harry go all Voldy-y now, which is going to be interesting... write more, I wanna know what happens!

The only thing wrong with this chapter was the lack of Ginny - oh, and now that you've mentioned it, you are obliged to write a Harry Potter version of Les Mis, cause that would just be indescribably awesome. 'Kay? :P
Tardis chapter 7 . 4/21/2008
oo! awesome!
Ginger Glinda the Tangerine chapter 7 . 4/21/2008
Here I go, reviewing while reading again...

*sobs* I can't beleive it's over! I've been listening to the original London people, and we're so much better... XD

Ooh, Nola likes to watch Harry work out... XD

"Williamson did Harry, who didn’t oppose the move – he knew the theory but not the practice" - ah, the sexual innuendo. I'm sorry, it's half past nine in the morning... T_T

“Like hell, Auror.”- ahh! I love it!

No! Thay be getting their asses kicked! T_T

Oh, no, wait, it's okay. Thay be kicking other people's asses. XD That was awesome, dear, very nicely written.

"He was standing to his full height, straighter, head tilted slightly to the side." - loving this whole paragraph so much... :O

OMG HP!Les Mis would be... well, pretty frightening, actually. I can just imagine Harry hanging off the barricade Enjy-styles and pushing his glasses up his nose at the same time... XD

Yay! That was awesome! I realise I've used that word way too much, but whatever.

TheatreBrat chapter 6 . 3/24/2008
Okay, okay, I pressed the button. But only so the world didn't implode. :P

Poor Harry... you really are cruel to him. The whole Nola reminding him of Tonks thing is just mean! Although, now he's all distracted and he'll be even more clueless... huh. Nice idea. :)

I love that Ron gets simultaneously attacked by the girls... poor Ron. Really funny, though.

Okay, here I go not knowing stuff again... do Aurors do physical training in the books? Because if not, good call on your part. They totally should.

Ooh, random thought - is Teddy going to get hurt by Harry when he's being all possessed and dark wizard-y? Cause that would be awesomely cruel and heartless.

The red eyes are full of win... the little flashes of things like that work really well. These are not the eyes you are looking for :P (sorry)

Ginny reading over Hermione's shoulder until she gets attention is very cute - I'm not entirely sure why, but it is.

And yes, I'm sure neck massages are wonderful. :P
Ginger Glinda the Tangerine chapter 6 . 3/23/2008
No! Universe must not implode!

Oh! I forgot Tonks died! T_T

Hey, it's like Teddy's Harry version 2.0... slightly worrying.

"She reminds me of Tonks…Merlin knows I need a shower,” - lol awesome! Random connections ftw...

Yay for Ron!

"Was it only a matter of time before someone decided to step up to the now empty position of ‘Evil Dark Wizard’" - I can just imagins someone sitting behind a little "Evil Dark Wizard" desk with a little namecard... XD

OK, so I reviewed this while I was reading, which was why it's so random-sounding... But aside from those strange asides, this was awsesome. Exceedingly well-written, as usual... you amke me feel so inadequate, my dear.

I'll see you tonight! Or possibly tomorrow, depending on when you get this... XD
Heartsong's Fanfictions chapter 6 . 3/22/2008

*Dives for cover as my part of the universe implodes*

...I pressed the purple button with the arrows on them -.-"

Next time, be more specific!

But I do love Harry's cluelessness, but I'm untrustworthy of Nora for some reason...
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