|Reviews for Silence the Past|
| DualWielding chapter 23 . 9/17/2014
I have some mixed feelings about this story. There's a lot to like about it and it kept me interested through the whole fic. Sometimes I felt bad for Harry and Draco, and other times they were adorable. Ginny, of course, was a horrible, pathetic excuse for a person, and I'm fine with that. I'm on the fence about Ron and Hermione. Not sure if I'm supposed to like them or not, but I was always glad when Harry stood up for himself.
Only a couple of minor things bugged me. Mainly that there was an absurd amount of yelling. Everyone seemed to be yelling, shouting and screaming at each other half the time. If these were real people, I wouldn't want to know any of them. I'm also pretty sure that much screaming in a hospital would have attracted Security, or a least a grouchy nurse, telling them to shut the hell up.
The other thing was an excessive use of the word 'smirk,' which is not the same as a smile. At best, it says, 'I'm a smartass.' It means to look smug or conceited or happy about someone else's misfortune, and the fact that Harry and Draco were forever smirking at each other tells me they aren't nice people and they don't like each other at all. I just did a search on the chapter I'm reviewing, the last one, and smirk is used nine times here. So yeah, in case you're still writing, I thought you should know what can detract from the enjoyment of an otherwise good fic.
I really did like the story, though, so I hope you keep it up.
| Danny chapter 21 . 9/8/2014
Harry is such an ass that he should just stay with Ginbitch and the other weasel vermin. They deserve each other. Draco can do so much better.
| Beth9891 chapter 23 . 6/3/2014
Angsty but in agood way.I already dispise Ginny your story just helped cemet it. I also cried in Cannons epilogue just felt so forced. Wanted to bad harry and Draco's heads together, glad they saw reason in the end!
| whatdoessnowbecome chapter 23 . 5/21/2012
What a sweet and cute story. Interesting lapse of amnesia.
| atlantis51 chapter 12 . 10/19/2011
I think 'Hearing' about what Draco thinks is great. But he is gay, he just doesn't know it yet, hahaha!
| atlantis51 chapter 8 . 10/19/2011
I think Draco should have felt somewhat flattered that Harry's worst fear is 'him' being dead. That would mean that Harry cares about him a lot. Draco needs to lighten up!
| atlantis51 chapter 7 . 10/19/2011
Good on Harry! And bad on Ginny, the little horny bitch!
| atlantis51 chapter 6 . 10/19/2011
I would NOT move back to that house with them! Especially Ginny! Harry will ha-a-a-t-e IT!
| Letie chapter 23 . 8/3/2011
I know you must have heard (read) this number of time, but nevertheless I need to say: "It was awesome!".
The last chapter was really well written. I'm not talking about spelling (see my mother language is not english) but about how it was written. I've really felt it - my heart's been feeling the their love all the way in that tent.
It really paid off reading it all the way till the end. First your writting seemed to me a little court but the plot was new for me and enticing.
So thanks for good HP/DM story - I may be 28 old and picky but this "fairy tale" leaves me in good mood and craving for more...
| Belle A Lestrange chapter 23 . 4/21/2011
Oh thank goodness I am so glad Ginny got told. She was insufferable and selfish throughout this chapter. I love a good ginny-bashing mwahahaha thank you for writing a wonderful story.
| Belle A Lestrange chapter 22 . 4/21/2011
Oh thank goodness he chose Draco!
| Belle A Lestrange chapter 18 . 4/21/2011
Oh God the heartache :'(
| Belle A Lestrange chapter 17 . 4/21/2011
Oh no. He remembers everything doesn't he? I hope he does not hate Draco.
| Belle A Lestrange chapter 16 . 4/21/2011
The irony is over-whelming
| Belle A Lestrange chapter 15 . 4/21/2011
omg so cute so hot wa