Reviews for The Black Petal
Guest chapter 13 . 12/28/2014
BUT...SORA AND KAIRI! and NAMINE AND RIKU! Aww! I'm sooo sad... But your story fallen portrait was truly amazing but I'm disappointed with no conclusion but thanks for the amazing story and a half:,,)
Meandor711 chapter 13 . 7/24/2013
I respect you for not continuing this story, even thought it makes me sad, I really enjoyed it so far and well yeah :)

I don't know if you even read these anymore but I really hope that you update or post another story soon, you've given back most of my inspiration and I thank you for that ;)
Seventh RidDle chapter 5 . 5/1/2013
Oh my gosh.
Simple Chaos chapter 1 . 10/9/2011
I can't wait to see where this story is heading. Your writing on this story is just as amazing as your first one. My only complaint is that when you switch characters or scenes, it gets a little confusing until you read a few lines in, and then you have to go back and reread a few lines to understand what's going on. Could you possibly use line breaks to make it a little more understandable? Thanks, and keep writing.
InfinityPuddle chapter 13 . 10/11/2010
Aw well. I was able to read Fallen Portrait, which was a masterpiece of human expressions. I lobed it. Have fun, and don't let your own facade get on the way of what you really want :D
ParadiseAvenger chapter 12 . 10/7/2010
I really like what you've written so far. Sora's character is very different, but very interesting. Kairi and Roxas are about the same. And Namine and Riku have become amazingly interesting. I really love what's going on with them.

Maybe ask for some suggestions. Sometimes if you're stuck, a different perspective helps.
ParadiseAvenger chapter 11 . 10/7/2010
What happened to Namine? Was she raped? Her developing relationship/friendship with Riku is very intruiging, but I really want to know when Sora and Kairi are going to make up.
ParadiseAvenger chapter 5 . 10/7/2010
I knew she was pregnant, but wow. How'd that happen if it wasn't Roxas and the other likely candidates (Riku, Sora) are very far away? Looking forward to the mystery.
ParadiseAvenger chapter 3 . 10/7/2010
I think SOra should just stop being around small children. They seem to cause him nothing but trouble. And Olette should've lended him a hand when the old guy called him and Zack started shredding stuff.
ParadiseAvenger chapter 1 . 10/7/2010
Well, I followed into the sequel. I wasn't sure I wanted to since the ending for the first part was so sad. I hope this one is happy. I felt like this chapter needed something to seperate the parts. It was hard to tell when the point of veiw switched, but I'm sure it did. Maybe you want to toss in some "XXX" between points of veiw. It would make it a lot easier to follow.
awkward tree chapter 13 . 9/17/2010
aww, that's too bad. I really enjoyed it all the way til the end. I look forward to more of your stories!
Libbybleu chapter 13 . 9/9/2010
:( sad face. Well I understand. I'm kinda disappointed though, I was very much looking forward to this story and since school had gotten me kinda down in the dumps (rejection hurts ya know?) I decided, "HEY, I haven't seen if The Black Petal has been continued or not. So when I see this I got kinda even more upset, but whatever. Completely understand where you're coming from...
awkward tree chapter 8 . 9/2/2010
I love the story so far! I've been following since 'The Fallen Portrait' Plus this chapter makes me sad yet anxious :) I'll read more now haha.
Ryusabre chapter 13 . 8/30/2010
Shame to hear you're done with this, but it's probably for the best. If your heart's not in it, then the story won't be any good, and you're right, Fallen Portrait does work fine on its own. If you're ever inspired to try again with this, please do, but don't force it. Good luck with your other stories.
rutger5000 chapter 13 . 8/30/2010
Hey, it's me again

I just noticed that this is the black petal, and not coasting. Have you not said before that you would stop with this one? Cause I have the feeling I already knew this. More importantly does this mean you're going to continue coasting? (pretty please).

Well anyway I loved this story too. It was very well written, and it sucked you in like the fallen portrait. Though I did not like it that Sora and Riku kind of switch places. In the Fallen Portrait Riku used to be the rich jerk, and that's pretty much what Sora has become. And now Riku is the creative genius with a self-loathing problem.

I don't know much else to say. I haven't read the Black Petal in so long, I just forgot most of it.

Rutger 5000
366 | Page 1 2 3 4 11 .. Last Next »