I want to say cute story...don't think it actually fits thinking of the ohana relationships in five-o...good story, too many guilty consciences though, first Danny's then Steve's...doesn't insure a good outcome...

Great story! It was nice to see Danny so vulnerable and so principled to worry that he might had made such a huge mistake. You show his caring and his guilt. I also love how you portrayed Steve's vulnerability and guilt, taking for granted Danny's resolve and sense of responsibility.

Fave Part:

Dan shook his head and McGarrett sighed. He had given Dan a piece of the puzzle, the worst possible piece, but not shown him the whole picture. "You were told that it was an impostor, someone disguised as me, but really a double agent. And that the impostor was going to leave the room and press a button that would destroy 12 American cities. You were the only one that could stop it. And so you did. But you didn't try to kill me."

-awesome! Loved this

Have only just watched Murder Eyes Only and think this is a great follow on to the story!

Great story...loved the Steve and Danno relationship.

Well done! I liked this very much! ;)

Awesome story! Thanks!

Deb

All I can do is echo the previous reviews. Excellent story!

Great story - so true to character! I absolutely LOVE seeing new Danno stories. Thank you

Enjoy all your stories, am so glad you are back to writing Hawaii Five 0.

As usual your latest story is excellent.

Another fantasic story. I really love the Danno angst and the way you captured both Danny's and Steve's guilt. I always wondered how Danno would react if he remembered. I am really hoping that you will post more of your Hawaii Five O stories. Not that I am hinting or anything. :D

Hey Merduff,

Fantastic to read another Hawaii Five 0 story from you. Another excellent follow up to an episode. Love Danno's guilt and the way it made Steve feel guilty too. Please, please don't go away - we would love more.