Reviews for A Matter of Trust
Elise Deschat chapter 1 . 11/18/2016
I want to say cute story...don't think it actually fits thinking of the ohana relationships in five-o...good story, too many guilty consciences though, first Danny's then Steve's...doesn't insure a good outcome...
SophieSaulie chapter 1 . 1/27/2011
Great story! It was nice to see Danny so vulnerable and so principled to worry that he might had made such a huge mistake. You show his caring and his guilt. I also love how you portrayed Steve's vulnerability and guilt, taking for granted Danny's resolve and sense of responsibility.

Fave Part:

Dan shook his head and McGarrett sighed. He had given Dan a piece of the puzzle, the worst possible piece, but not shown him the whole picture. "You were told that it was an impostor, someone disguised as me, but really a double agent. And that the impostor was going to leave the room and press a button that would destroy 12 American cities. You were the only one that could stop it. And so you did. But you didn't try to kill me."

-awesome! Loved this
carismum chapter 1 . 1/14/2011
Have only just watched Murder Eyes Only and think this is a great follow on to the story!
LisaG16 chapter 1 . 9/3/2009
Great story...loved the Steve and Danno relationship.
Deana chapter 1 . 4/28/2008
Well done! I liked this very much! ;)
girlfic chapter 1 . 4/8/2008
Awesome story! Thanks!

RTO42 chapter 1 . 2/29/2008
All I can do is echo the previous reviews. Excellent story!
Meg54 chapter 1 . 2/26/2008
Great story - so true to character! I absolutely LOVE seeing new Danno stories. Thank you
alexes chapter 1 . 2/22/2008
Enjoy all your stories, am so glad you are back to writing Hawaii Five 0.

As usual your latest story is excellent.
Traw chapter 1 . 2/22/2008
Another fantasic story. I really love the Danno angst and the way you captured both Danny's and Steve's guilt. I always wondered how Danno would react if he remembered. I am really hoping that you will post more of your Hawaii Five O stories. Not that I am hinting or anything. :D
LucyMb chapter 1 . 2/21/2008
Hey Merduff,

Fantastic to read another Hawaii Five 0 story from you. Another excellent follow up to an episode. Love Danno's guilt and the way it made Steve feel guilty too. Please, please don't go away - we would love more.