Reviews for Gentleman
Mdots chapter 1 . 7/13/2008
Hilarious. Wonderful job. Though I agree that its a bit OOC but it suits Edward. Poor edward ;) :D

Keep it up .. :D
AmazingBouncingFerret445 chapter 1 . 7/10/2008
so sweet :)

made me smile.

and, for the record, it wasn't thAAt OOC.

nice work!
TheGreatestHeroine chapter 1 . 7/8/2008
aaw... poor eddie :(

just a little more patience, love and he's sure t get what he wants :D
PoorlyKnitted chapter 1 . 7/7/2008
Haha...Edward should just listen to Bella...
Masamune's Song chapter 1 . 6/24/2008
Wow, I don't usually come across fanfics that I find this entertaining. Good work with Edward's mindset!
booksickle chapter 1 . 6/1/2008
XD AWW! It's so cute and... Edward-licious! And about that battle... I think he /almost/ lost in Eclipse!
GODSLOVE chapter 1 . 5/31/2008
Aw. Poor Edward! God, he's so hot when he's horny. You mean, mean girl! Torturing Edward like that! And I'm not talking about Bella! I'm talking to you, miss author woman! lol! I would totally do the same thing!

Edward's getting naughty thoughts isn't he? He's gettin frisky. lol! And horny. and everything else that makes me want a cold shower.

I LOVED IT!

-Brittany
Twilightzoner chapter 1 . 5/20/2008
Great job with a difficult subject. I think you captured Edward quite well.
IceVampGirl231 chapter 1 . 5/15/2008
I really liked how you touched up on Edward's personality favorable well (not that I know much . ) I congragulate you!

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lizzles chapter 1 . 4/25/2008
Really really really really good!
bitten-sln chapter 1 . 4/23/2008
you should definitely write more! will me waiting. :)
bemystar chapter 1 . 4/14/2008
OH GOD. amazing. xDD
SatuAka chapter 1 . 4/8/2008
OMG crack fic or not that was amazing

my friend recommended it to me, this being my first Twilight fic; i didn't think anyone could do the story justice, but i must say this was absolutely amazing and hilarious and filled with oodles of sexual frustration...poor Edward haha

LOVED it
NoMoreThanUsual chapter 1 . 4/4/2008
I don't think that was out of character at all! I loved it. I think Edward is just lucky there's no mind reader around! LOL

This was terrific!
crystalwolfberri chapter 1 . 3/27/2008
XD aw, poor Eddie! too bad, you can't have her yet! xD

nice fic, pretty funny. it may be OOC for the OUTSIDE Edward, but what about INSIDE, where he thinks? he may actually be thinking like that! the HORROR! lol
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