|Reviews for Entwined Hearts|
| pstibbons chapter 4 . 4/4/2009
Enjoyed the banter - Selmak, Jacob, Jack...
Teal'c gets underused...
best line: “Have you tried percussive maintenance?”
| pstibbons chapter 3 . 4/4/2009
Hallelujah hallelujah hallelujah hallelujah hallelujah hallelujah hallelujah hallelujah hallelujah hallelujah
| pstibbons chapter 2 . 4/4/2009
best line: “They must want to make the cover of Better Secret Bases and Gardens.”
| pstibbons chapter 1 . 4/4/2009
Best line: “Don’t make me laugh when I’m trying to be grumpy.”
| Whirlwind421 chapter 5 . 8/18/2008
| Terelou chapter 5 . 3/3/2008
A and T: great story. Great A/N at the end. You gals are a great team!
| nexis44 chapter 5 . 3/3/2008
this so needs a sequal! great job;o)
| Entropic Cascade chapter 5 . 3/3/2008
An entire box of virtual cookies to you and your beta. In particular I'd like to thank her for kicking your ar*e and getting you to write a longer sex scene (I'd have been pulling out the virtual Amaranth Traces voodoo doll otherwise lol!)
But seriously - loved the story, followed it all the way through and enjoyed every second of reading (even going back to read it all again on occasions!)
Can't wait for the next one now! :D
| SpaceMonkey0941 chapter 5 . 3/3/2008
Hey, you got Jonas into it! Great job!
I liked this trilogy, it was a fun read, and although it was slightly shorter than I'd hoped (sigh) you did a very nice job of wrapping up all the loose ends. Kudos!
| KatieMichelleBelle chapter 5 . 3/3/2008
Yea! You made it! Loved the "conversations" Sam and Daniel were having across the room with only their eyes. They must have had a lot of fun that night and I'm sure Janet wanted all the details. Loved that they visited Jonas' planet and that they were able to leave in a much better condition than in the TV show timeline.
Hope you already have plot bunnies hopping around for your next story!
| Jess13 chapter 5 . 3/3/2008
Wow, I can't believe it's over already. That was some enjoyable reading! I didn't get a chance to review the previous chapter so I'll combine them both here.
I liked the implied Jacob/Selmak banter. As for Sam and Daniel, could these two get any cuter? Seriously. The rock/scissors/paper to determine who tells Jack about their relationship... adorable. Speaking of that, it's nice to see Jack portrayed as wise in ways you might not expect. That also goes for the way he is the one who gets that device to work. As for his Fonzie impression, I can just picture the pained looks on various human/alien faces. ;)
Loved the epilogue as well. I like your twist on the events of Meridian. It's nice to see a happier outcome as far as that's concerned, and I like how Jonas ends up working in Daniel's department.
Can't go wrong with whipped cream, huh. ;)
Great job on this one, hon. :)
| phoenixmagic1 chapter 5 . 3/3/2008
amazing job..loved every word! :)
please write more S/D...you're amazing! :)
God and peace
| Will chapter 5 . 3/3/2008
Okay...that ending was rushed. Don't get me wrong, I like that Daniel and Sam got their collective act together, but so much more could have been done with that particlar story. Liked the chapter preceding this one.
| Quiet Fury chapter 5 . 3/3/2008
It was wonderful! I'm very pleased with these stories!
*sends virtual cookies to Thraesja and Amaranth*
*feeds plot bunnies for good measure* :)
| drgemini86 chapter 5 . 3/3/2008
Oh, you Canadians...
Funnily enough, I'm not drunk... I don't need to be although these wee things would be even more chaotic and unhinged.
Gosh, I think I saw it aeons ago when I was about 7 or so, & as I have trouble remembering what happened a year ago...
Well I looked it up on Wikipedia & got it in hindsight, you little Ewok
Oh dear... haven't had my breakfast yet (I know it's after midday here in lotteryville) & I'm staring at a canister of dust after finally getting time to hoover...
Loved the percussive maintenance in the last chapter. I mention it cos I've been chuckling about it while hoovering lol
And what an epilogue! Loved it in all its AU-ness & other things. Lucky Jack didn't spot her nicking that can cos he'd be jumping at the chance to embarrass them.
Thought it was cute that they gave the other credit for Langara.