|Reviews for Hollow Thunder, Vital Lightning|
| sunneedee chapter 11 . 2/28
| fooplaya chapter 11 . 2/27
I just founds your story and could hardly put it down! Can't wait for more, but I can be patient! Is the undisclosed warning about suicide (Alphard over Hadrian? ) Also, what's with Hadrian not liking meat? Is that just random preference, or something more? Anyways, how you and your family are well :-)
| Death'sSymphony chapter 4 . 2/22
Thank you, thank you, thank you SO MUCH for not making Harry-Hadrian give up Quidditch. I have always seen that part of him as, well, him. And a lot of stories where he is powerful, intelligent and a bit OOC made him throw his sport away. haa, But this one is now my favorite ;) U r BRILLIANT.
| lovelymaiden chapter 11 . 2/18
Update please! Soon! Please!
| Sitanya chapter 11 . 2/17
I hope you will continue this story soon :) It is quite interesting and well written !
| LunarCatNinja chapter 11 . 2/15
Oh dear. I can just imagine that Hadrian will go to Tom and show him just how much he ISN'T a consort soon enough! I love this story, and I'm looking forward to reading more.
| khjgf chapter 11 . 2/15
great story, thank you please continue. what about alpard? i hope tom didn't hurt him much. i can't wait for sex scene. will tom love harry? will he change? will harry be pregnant? it would be interesting. please continue
| Anon chapter 11 . 2/11
Hey, just wanted to say that I love your story and what you've done with the characters! I can't wait to find out what happens next, and hope that you'll be able to get a new chapter out soon! Good luck with the writing!
| jasperslover chapter 11 . 2/7
Damn. I want more! this story has been so enticing! I hope that you continue to write ! :)
| solsere chapter 11 . 1/30
Wow, love this story! I love that it's a post-final-battle kind of AU/dimension travel, and how confident and self-assured/powerful Harry is despite his feelings of purposelessness. The way you did the merging of Harry and Hadrian was well done too! And I love how Harry is still neutral and still has his "saving-people-thing" despite having learned dark spells. I must admit, one of my favorite parts is how dominant Harry is - I am so tired of reading stories where Voldemort dominates him all the time - I think it's awesome that they are on equal grounds (no matter how Tom wishes otherwise), manipulate each other, etc. I seriously look forward to reading about the winter break and Hadrian's past.
| Fan chapter 11 . 1/26
Gotta love Riddle.
| Niji-neko chapter 11 . 1/25
Great chapter! Though I wonder if Hadriand/Tom will let their guard down when with each other if for a momment xD .
Have a good one
| Lauren Saint chapter 11 . 1/18
Poor Tom Hadrian is pissed, haha. :D looking forward to the next chapter and what happens When Tom is found :D Also looking forward to Tom's 18th and his inheritance! Wonder if something has changed there since Harry Mergel into this new world!? Can't wait to find out!
Love this story, and your writing style!
| Algorithms chapter 11 . 1/16
Well that warning better not be 'major character death (or even minor)'. I've no idea what it could be, but I'm eager to find out. I love their mind games and possesive relation ( I'm yours, you're mine and that's it). Hopefully the mystery of the voices will be explained soon, since it's driving me crazy. I can't wait for the inevitable fight when they talk politics, I'm sure it will be explosive!
Your story is really well writing. It is so frustrating when the plot is decent but the writing is so stilted or littered with spelling mistakes. Thankfully, you don't have that problem, both writing and plot are amazing!
| 125b chapter 11 . 1/12
How two such intelligent people can be Such dunderheads