Reviews for Hush
Animaddie chapter 1 . 7/23/2013
This is brilliant, well done on such a good read :)
Fenris Jin chapter 1 . 2/26/2013
Another tragic one.. well it's KaiRuki.. duh.

Lovely work, especially with Shirayuki and Rukia.. :3
Shubhs chapter 1 . 9/6/2012
I think... It didn't satisfy me either but the spirit of the story fits that. If it satisfied me, then I'd be strangely disappointed because Rukia's story always had that little bit of expectancy attached to it and if portrayed in such a manner, it'd only be right that that hint of potential and expectation we all can see, isn't delivered in the end. :)
xXxShiniXKazexXx chapter 1 . 9/11/2011
Wow, awesome ;)
NeverWillBe chapter 1 . 1/31/2011
I'm mildly surprised to see chinese characters but that was a pretty good way to show transition between parts of the fic. May I suggest that you edit the very first line "你想的想法" to "你的想法" though? It would sound better and the extra word in there was redundant anyway.

I like the way you portrayed Rukia. The lil' things that matters in unrequited love were generally well-explored; thus the story feels real.

Nevertheless I agree with you about the ending. It does feel a bit...off.

All in all a good fic. Well done! )
wysei chapter 1 . 12/22/2010
So touching! ;u;

... not to mention the chinese was actually pretty correctly translated, lol. :x Poor Rukia. D8
Ninja Dee chapter 1 . 8/27/2009
That was really well done. I hope you make a sequel or something cause it's so sad at the end. T.T But it was still great. I especially love how you have chinese in there! I think it's really cool! :D
Mord5ith chapter 1 . 3/9/2009
I'm crying and I hate you.

Just kidding, but I'm a waterfall now.
justcallmefaye chapter 1 . 2/18/2009
wow, that was depressing...in the BEST POSSIBLE WAY. i just finished reading this arc in the manga, and i hoped to find an excellent ficcy to follow it up, and lo and behold, you'd written one! so thank you for that; it was a very nicely done conclusion. :D

Faye
Eden Lies chapter 1 . 1/22/2009
Bloody brilliant...especially these lines:

"As Sode no Shirayuki’s ice wraps around Nejibana’s ocean spray in a slow embrace and as Nejibana’s great tides break free of that constraining hold, Rukia finally understands.

Kaien belongs to no one."

great job!
SunsetRainbow chapter 1 . 9/22/2008
Oh gosh

that was amazing

exhilariting

beautiful

gorgeous

:P I'm running out of adjectives to describe this oneshot!
Jeanne Reveur chapter 1 . 9/14/2008
Wow, so sad. I feel so bad for her. I'm pretty sure I screamed in joy when she came back to life.
Paper Bullet chapter 1 . 7/28/2008
This was beautiful and absolutely amazing - just what I'd expect from you. God, you never cease to amaze me and you're a very talented author. Your stories definitely have a unique style to them and are all great. So..Gahh so amazing! And btw, go update Punishment please :D

Much Love,

Ami
Slytherin Kunoichi chapter 1 . 7/23/2008
That was really a remarkable story. I loved "As Sode no Shirayuki’s ice wraps around Nejibana’s ocean spray in a slow embrace and as Nejibana’s great tides break free of that constraining hold, Rukia finally understands. Kaien belongs to no one."

That line was perfect.

Very nice job.
youshallnotpass chapter 1 . 7/20/2008
This is fantastic. I particularly love the last line. "She dies alone". How tragically fitting. Loved it. You are one of the true greats.
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