|Reviews for Family!|
| Guest chapter 10 . 4/26
I like the plot of your story!
| Yushininata chapter 3 . 4/12
Allen is actually 40 something... but whatever... lets all dream on! :D
| Guest chapter 10 . 1/10
Plz Continue the story your a really good writer:)
| Guest chapter 10 . 11/28/2014
Need more chapters
| road.to.fulfill chapter 10 . 11/14/2014
when will the next chapter be out
I really hate it when good stories go onto cliff hangers
| Sinfulangels chapter 10 . 10/6/2014
Update update update!
| RedsnowofKyuubi chapter 10 . 9/17/2014
Please update i love this series oh and gave random cuoples like kanda and lavi or crawry and miranda
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/2/2014
I liked this but just sad that I read this so late from when it was written. It had something going for it until its unfortunate end. If some could continue this. That would be fantastic.
| bwmimi1 chapter 1 . 8/5/2014
I feel extremely honored to be reading your first fanfic.
| Blackrose2358 chapter 10 . 4/15/2014
Can't wait for the next update the suspense...
| Elina chapter 10 . 2/2/2014
| TOOLAZYTOLOGIN chapter 10 . 1/19/2014
DAFUQ? Excuse my language that doesnt make any sense at all. PLEASE CONTINUE THIS STORY! THIS STORY IS AWESOME HOW COULD YOU JUST LEAVE IT!?
| Ascuteasme as chapter 10 . 1/14/2014
Ok, first of all, I love it, but, u were kind of jumping around a lot, u lost me at chap 4-5 where did the white allen go...?,
| Ascuteasme chapter 1 . 1/14/2014
Love it, good job on ur first fanfiction!, but I prefer tyke x allen...
| Angellx chapter 6 . 12/16/2013
And this is why people don't tell allen things.