Reviews for Lucy and Erza
Guest chapter 1 . 3/21
This is so pathetic, none of it is is believable or interesting, the only thing that would fit the character is how Lucy reacted, other than that, complete trash.
Guest chapter 1 . 4/21/2016
THIS IS HORRIBLE IT DOSENT EVEN SOUND LIKE FARIY TAIL!
Guest chapter 1 . 5/16/2015
Mated like bunnies... really. 3:
fairychime-diamond47 chapter 1 . 11/28/2014
huhhhh! :OOOO Such a perv Makarov -_-. But Erza was the most OOC :ooooo. Lucy would be the most regular person in fanfics and anime -_-
Guest chapter 1 . 8/3/2014
Your only use is manipulating people with your boobs XD so harsh hahahahaha
Dsman chapter 1 . 8/1/2014
your a nut.
redvelvetcupcake chapter 1 . 5/12/2014
you made Marakov too mean... :(
animerulesearth99 chapter 1 . 1/9/2014
best...story...ever
Guest chapter 1 . 4/3/2013
Wow...Makarov was kinda weird in this...well, good job!'
Guest chapter 1 . 4/1/2013
wow just wow. they had sex at the end. good story!
Guest chapter 1 . 2/14/2013
. .Did. .Read 0_o I'm petrified of Erza now.
Kittyjkat21 chapter 1 . 2/11/2013
Lol, cute
zero chapter 1 . 1/28/2013
Brrrr...just reading this gives me the creeps...by the way,can you make a part where erza wears an unremovable magic mask?(make it so that it silents her up too.(_))
oniwuufu chapter 1 . 11/7/2011
*eww face* no makarov joor to old
IaMnEmIsIs chapter 1 . 11/3/2011
...WHAT IS THIS? ERZA IS TOO MUCH OUT OF CHARACTER. I DONT LIKE IT.
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