|Reviews for When it Rains|
| Guest chapter 16 . 4/20
That was me, oh no i am a good shot.
| Guest chapter 7 . 4/19
Daniel could have been the saviour chasing away an assailant, kill david, kill david
| White Light White Heat chapter 28 . 2/5/2011
Yet another story that I wish didn't have to end. Absolutely brilliant. I usually don't go for the romance stuff but I loved this. Tanya and Daniel just make such a great couple and in a way it's kind of nice to see that he has finally caught a break after the torture you put him through:) Not that I would have it any other way:P
| michal-chan chapter 28 . 7/15/2009
Wonderful story! I loved it! :D
I have never enjoyd a Daniel story more than this one, Good job! :)
| sissybear chapter 6 . 12/12/2008
I'm loving this story, but do you have another copy of this chapter, the paragraphs seem to contain mostly fragmented and runon sentences. i don't know if something happened during an edit or something, but it's really hard to follow and decipher like this. i really really love this story, though
| Lady D chapter 28 . 10/19/2008
'Got word of a good fic named Crosswired - saw your link to DeviantArt - saw the pic of Daniel tied up in the rain (very nice art by the way) and I was curious about the story behind it. All I can say is that it was a very good story, (very good) - to have come up with such as elaborate well paced story from the artwork and then a sequel to boot while creating believable OCs, Tanya and her twin brother... well done! I liked Tanya. I started reading 'Caught Out in the Rain' on DeviantArt and got suckered right into the sequel 'When it Rains,' back to back, no recess. All 28 Chapters of it in one go-through! It was worth the not eating and doing the all-day house-slug thing to read all of it. One word for improvement is to have a beta-reader look it over, there were several missing adverb endings that I caught. However, I thoroughly enjoyed what you did here. I plan to read Crosswired as well but now with much more expectation of a wonderfully thought out and told story.
Thanks for sharing. Lady D
| Somnium1 chapter 28 . 9/4/2008
truely fab fic :D I loved so many bits I don't know where to start. Really wished I'd left you a review at each chapter but I couldn't stop reading lol. I love the humour you chuck in and the back and forth conversations you capture so well. Good to see a little more Teal'c in this, oh and thanks for the Sam/Jack shipyness at the end there ;D
| Somnium1 chapter 6 . 9/2/2008
I love it what a great chapter, really very well written. Great twist too really had me on the edge of my seat.
| phoenixmagic1 chapter 28 . 6/14/2008
GREAT ending! Very appropriate and well written :)
God and peace
| adlucem chapter 28 . 6/13/2008
I love it! The ending was perfect, and I've been so happy to see your frequent updates. Thanks for a great story!
| Firewolfe chapter 28 . 6/13/2008
Way cool way to fix the phoebia. More a sequel please
| Spyridon chapter 28 . 6/13/2008
Oh, Daniel and Tanya are going to have a baby! Hey, but at least Daniel got over his fear. And what twins? Who are they? How do they act? Where's the parents and family's reaction.
I want to know about them. Want more of this AU!
| JackGirl chapter 28 . 6/13/2008
Though i did come into this story rather late, I have enjoyed it very much. Sorry its over.
| starjems88 chapter 28 . 6/13/2008
will there be a sequel of sorts?
| AT Fan chapter 28 . 6/13/2008
aww funny how rain doesn't matter when you are happy. Good for Daniel. He will make a great father.