|Reviews for 300 Based a little more on the movie|
| hahaiamnothereanymore chapter 2 . 3/20/2008
This is good. Are you trying to make it more historically accurate than the movie? Cuz if you are, you'll want to give Sparta two kings.
But that's your choice. I will most definitely keep reading.
I like your writing style; it's quite similar to mine. Oh, and in the last paragraph of chapter two, you put that Leonidas turned his backs. That's just a simple mistake, unless of course Leonidas has two backs. :)
May the gods bless you,
| Arnold chapter 2 . 2/28/2008
hey, i like the story, i saw the movie and it was a blast. keep it up champ.