Reviews for Saving Katy
ButterflyGirl89 chapter 11 . 6/22/2009
Great update honey. Brilliant chapter. Glad you managed to do this. Post more soon. x
carlie.catastrophe chapter 4 . 6/17/2009
Heres some constructive critisism.

You have quite a few spelling errors, make sure to spell check becfore submitting. Also work on sentence structure and seperating paragraphs.

It should skip a line every time somebody talks.
sunkissedsummer4 chapter 10 . 4/27/2008
Is that the end of it? I love this story!

Reilly (Riley)
Maggie Doyle chapter 10 . 4/26/2008
good story! can't wait for more!
ButterflyGirl89 chapter 5 . 3/16/2008
good job. Update soon. X
ButterflyGirl89 chapter 4 . 3/16/2008
Poor Katy. X
ButterflyGirl89 chapter 3 . 3/16/2008
You've really captured the characters. Well done. X
ButterflyGirl89 chapter 2 . 3/16/2008
this is pretty suspensful. good work. X
deletedanonymous111 chapter 1 . 2/24/2008
You have a very realistic story, and have managed to capture the ways of the Detectives - and also how they would (on the show) handle something like this. I like your story, and if you intend to write more, which I am hoping, then I will be delighted to read more.

Good job!
EnforcerAndAccuserFan chapter 1 . 2/23/2008
A sight-challenged victim would have a different persective of her crime. She would, of course, miss visual clues while catching others unnoticed by a sighted person would miss. Your stoy angle is intriguing. Furthermore, you set up the storyline well, showing a "typical" work moment before the mother arrives. This gives a realistic feel to the story.

Keep up the good work.