Reviews for Forever And Ever And Ever
RogueWriter1990 chapter 8 . 10/14
Please end with ColinxMary I love them.
RogueWriter1990 chapter 7 . 10/14
I like Dickon but have shipped Mary and Colin since I first read the book. Back when I didn't even know what shipping meant.
RogueWriter1990 chapter 1 . 10/14
Love Mary and Colin! Great chapter!
AmorFatiAhMi chapter 9 . 6/28/2014
This was quite sad but you did portray it realistically. Mary and Dickon could not be together even though everyone would wish for their happiness but in turn I suppose that's what everyone is looking out for. Their happiness would be jeopardized with their courtship. Sad how love isn't enough sometimes.

I like your portrayal of Colin, though I do feel like his more selfish, aggressive and brash qualities were missing. He was in mourning though, so understandable

There were grammar issues and some minor spelling errors but in all it was readable and enjoyable.

Good job
justareadernow chapter 9 . 3/3/2013
Wow this fic is incredible though the end was really angsty but it was a really good ending. I agree mary and dickon cant be together considering their status. I am really happy that they didnt end up together XD MaryxColin fan btw :D
PhantomWhispers chapter 9 . 1/1/2013
Wonderful ending, albeit trolling. I mun' say that tha's proud to ha' be'n reviewing! (Yorkshire, goodness...) Really, you're writing is amazing.

Thanks and great job (I am sure to read the sequel.)!
PhantomWhispers chapter 8 . 1/1/2013
Angst. Humph, you weren't joking, eh? Sequel... Well. Good job!
PhantomWhispers chapter 7 . 1/1/2013
Sob. Sob. And sob. Lizbeth is just perect. Good job again, mate.
PhantomWhispers chapter 6 . 1/1/2013
Hmm... Interesting.
PhantomWhispers chapter 5 . 1/1/2013
Miserable yet peaceful. I Honestly don't know how though. Beautiful writings.
PhantomWhispers chapter 4 . 1/1/2013
Lizbeth Ellen seemsso innocent actually... Colin is downright perfect in your story as well.

Good job!
PhantomWhispers chapter 3 . 1/1/2013
The garden. Dickon. Everything was wonderful.
PhantomWhispers chapter 2 . 1/1/2013
So sad... But an extraordinary job.
PhantomWhispers chapter 1 . 1/1/2013
It is barely even the first chapter and I am struggling to not swell with tears.

Good job!
wildecstasy chapter 1 . 4/14/2012
i like it that the story is beautifully written, but i don't think that mary and dickon don't belong together is agreeable

they had known each other for a long time, he was not a poor boy she had just met you know. yet, colin and dickon are not why not?

i think that it should tell more about the friendship though. it seems like colin and dickon had never been such a close friend.

it still one of the best secret graden though!
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