Reviews for Blending
Suki-Itami chapter 1 . 1/31/2009
_ I like it! Hurray for Saso/Dei!
Arashi-Kumo chapter 1 . 12/2/2008
I liked, it was nice to see Sasori and Deidara in a loving light.
Devilis Kyuu chapter 1 . 4/10/2008
I LOVE this! It was written beautifully
I Got Pwnd chapter 1 . 3/7/2008
That. Was. VERY. Well. Writen...and awesome...
Maelza chapter 1 . 3/6/2008
WoW I love how you had to rushed but not wat the same time

you wrote it in a beautiful manner which captivates the reader and doesn't ruin the story-line as it rushes through. A dnthat dear, is hard to do!

love this love XD

One suggestion I have for you [you don't have to do it though] is try to write a long story [though it can be a 'oneshot'] like maybe 1500 words just to see how you are with that. It's just a suggestion to try to broaden out your writiing skills

I quickly read over your Deitobi [though i only like evil!tobidei lol] and I found it pretty good. Though, it was a bit rushed. :P So maybe try to write a long story

hints: try to describe the actions and the words a little more but not get off topic

soo gl if you try
black55widow chapter 1 . 3/6/2008
I like this story also. I hope you feel like writing more Mature fics.
HuMaN-EaTiNg-PaNdA -HEP chapter 1 . 2/24/2008
great story

but a little mix up

this is deidara/sasori, the dominant one goes first

and please dont take that the wrong way it was an awesome story very greatly written

-HEP-
Cupe chapter 1 . 2/24/2008
That was amazing. I loved it! Very, very good!
Sempiternal Goddess chapter 1 . 2/24/2008
LOVVEE! That was awesome!
CrawlingInTheDark657 chapter 1 . 2/23/2008
Love and cookies! This story was awesome! So hot!
Rusalian96 chapter 1 . 2/23/2008
this is pure 'love' between sasori and deidara, to make it simply

I love this story

KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK