|Reviews for Chosen Shinobi|
| Nessa671 chapter 8 . 8/12/2011
Please update soon.
| Taeniaea chapter 7 . 8/16/2010
Very Cool Story Plz Update It Soon!
| Lydia1995 chapter 8 . 7/9/2010
I like this story!
PLS UPDATE SOON!
| nurr chapter 8 . 4/13/2009
I really love this. I like how you wrote this, and how you'd give out the different perspectives from different people on what's happening. It's like giving us a small free taste and making us want it more.
It's just sad though that it's been months since you've last updated this. I know you said in this chapter that you're not discontinuing it, and I hope that you would still be able to continue this. (Ya know, to reassure us and stuff. XD)
Again, I really love this. Hope you update soon. C:
| Shinen no Hikari chapter 8 . 2/4/2009
well if you got them written stop holding out. Aren't bands all over done by now.
| Shinen no Hikari chapter 5 . 2/4/2009
The mission didn't take place in Kirigakure(the hidden mist) it took place in Nami no kuni(land of waves)
| rhythmxecho chapter 4 . 12/14/2008
Taiora, Sasuke/Hikari, Kenyako, Ryuki, Takumi, LeeSaku, and NaruHina. It's a really good story so far! How old are the savers?
| imaginedreams22 chapter 4 . 11/2/2008
what happened to koichix Hikari? i want great! update soon!
| laughing on the inside chapter 8 . 11/1/2008
yay hikarixsasuke, but i also like takari...lol i also like koujixkari, im glad gatomon hasn't been revealed yet. when she is though i hope its a huge reveal, y'know? like really flashy and everything. well i really love your story and hope u update really soon!
| Nick Johnson chapter 1 . 8/29/2008
Here are my questions. 1. What is the fanfic about? 2. What locations are being used? 3. When does it take place? 4. How old is everyone that is in the fanfic? 5. Do Digimon exist at all in the fanfic? 6. Is there a Team 1? Be sure to let me know.
| Super garurumon chapter 1 . 7/15/2008
Takumi All the WAY! Kenyako! Taiora! Im all for Suzie/Konohamaru
| JuMiKu chapter 7 . 7/14/2008
I really like this story so far. The fusion of the different worlds seems pretty flawless so, although the many characters kinda reduce the pace and dynamics of the plot.
I'd have really liked to see some interaction between Ruki and Naruto, probably on the basis of the fact that her partner is a fox and she probably would judge him for imprisoning a monster (She really has no right to judge anyone). Maybe you could still use some of the ideas even if they don't end up together? I mean they are teens and needn't take crushes that seriously, yet.
Talking about that.
May I still vote for the pairings?
I like Hinata and Naruto together and due to recent chapters don't think Sasuke deserves someone like Hikari. He would just destroy her spirit.
May I perhaps suggest a completely new pairing as well? Ryo and even Takuya are relatively normal pairings for Ruki, but maybe you could spice things up a bit by pairing her with Neji? It just seems to fit because their characters are almost identical (*cough*think they are better than everyone*cough*). The only stark difference is the fact that Neji believes way too much in fate and Ruki on the other hand biomerged to mega for the first time when she declared she believed fate could be beaten.
| Sentariana chapter 7 . 7/8/2008
Wow! That was really good but you've got one heck of a story to write because in 'Naruto' there are over 100 episodes!
I think that TK and Kari should definately be a couple-I heard a rumore that in the last episode of 'Digimon Adventures' Tk and Kari KISS!
| s4ik0ryu chapter 7 . 7/7/2008
Interesting chapter, a tad bit confusing but nonetheless good. Maybe you should get a beta-reader and try to be a bit more descriptive in some action scenes. Sorry if I sound like a jerk, its been a bit of a hectic week for me. Exams, projects, and such.
Ok what I meant about the Chosen girls is that they MIGHT have notice or a least been aware of Hinata’s feelings for Naruto, since the majority of girls (especially Ino and Sakura) were to caught up with Sasuke.
Here’s my opinion.
Hikari: I gonna say that she wasn’t aware about Hinata’s crush but she might piece it together if she sees them interact. She’ll probably try to get them together or least get them to become friends. BTW I’m guessing Hinata feels and is afraid that Naruto and Hikari might end up together.
Juri: I’ll say that yes she was aware of Hinata’s crush and might have even encouraged Hinata to make her move. Juri probably was told by father to stay away for Naruto, but her mother and stepmother might not have a problem with it.
Ruki: Ok I’m sure that Ruki is observant enough to notice Hinata’s glances towards Naruto, but decided to do nothing. One reason could be is that she believes that Hinata’s needs to grow a spine and tell Naruto that she likes him. Another one could be is that Ruki feels an attraction towards Naruto and is unsure what to make of it. Her mother might not really like Naruto but her grandmother probably respects him and might know Sarutobi personally.
Izumi: I believe Izumi as well knew about Hinata’s crush on Naruto, as well Koji’s on Hinata. So she is unsure of what to do. Should she help hook up the Hyuuga heir with her friend, who basically has a good life or Naruto, who life has basically suck since the day of his birth. Her parents view on Naruto, no idea.
Hm, also I get the feeling that Naruto will be the one to discover both Hikari's secret and Tailmon and it will be funny.
Hope you update soon!
Power Scale(My thoughts)Ignore if you like.
Note: High level can also be viewed a low level of their next stage.
Kyuubi (9 Tails)- ?
7 to 8- High level Super Ultimate/Low level ?
5 to 6- High level Ultimate/Low level Super Ultimate
3 to 4- High level Perfect/Low level Ultimate
1 to 2- High level Adult/Low level Perfect
| MusicalJourney chapter 7 . 7/6/2008
Um... that was awesome!
But for the parings I think you should do Kari and Kouichi.