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![]() ![]() I don't like werewolves in stories or films. Especially Sam and jacob . So I'm gonna stop reading now |
![]() ![]() i love the story libe your writing style is good but chapters are too short and i also have to agree with other comments a lot of it is jumbled up please write in one pov for a few chapters other then that i love it amazing story cheers |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very amazingly good-I really like the twist and all. But one small thing-it is kind of just a little hard to focus on the story when u write such small chapters. Try to write longer and just wait longer to publish. Sorry-not flaming but just saying. |
![]() ![]() ![]() GOGOGOGOGOGO! |
![]() ![]() ![]() a reaaly origional twist ... i cant wait to see what happens... update soon plzz! |
![]() ![]() ![]() im sorry what! did sam confuse leah clearwater for bella or what happened! love it so far please update -ramble8 |
![]() ![]() ![]() it could be leah and not bella wat the f* u need to get ur thought in order. collapsong...werewolf wat the hell write more |
![]() ![]() ![]() PLEASE PLEAASE CONTINUE!:):):) I ABSOLUTLY LOV IT!:):):):D:D |
![]() ![]() ![]() OH come ON! You CAN'T just leave me hangin' there so please write quick!:):)::P:P:P |