Reviews for Trouble
lisa chapter 2 . 4/21/2013
Ahh! You can't stop there you need to continue x I want to see of Jennifer is going to go kick in Jamie's step dad , good job so far. Please update soon .
loststolenandfound chapter 2 . 10/14/2011
I just found this, I wish you could update? I really like this story and I think it's well written. Really hope you haven't given up on this story and I've never beta'd for anyone before but if you're still looking for one then I'd be happy to give it a go.
HopperB08 chapter 2 . 10/27/2009
It's great (Y) and i'd love to Beta for you :) I've really enjoyed it. There aren't many Ultimate Force fics out there... :)
Utemia chapter 1 . 8/5/2009
Good concept, but your spelling and grammar is bloody awful :) and you could polish up the dialogue and sequence events a bit more.
loststolenandfound chapter 1 . 11/25/2008
i loke where this story is headed. hope you continue. i noticed a few errors but you know, no biggie...
Drakkenfyre chapter 1 . 4/28/2008
Woot! Ultimate Force fix, and by a fellow CSI fan! So . . . going to write another?
Ominae chapter 1 . 3/4/2008
Not bad. A Jamie-centric fic! Some spelling errors and all that, but otherwise a good start.