Reviews for Golden Apples
atlanta chapter 6 . 10/17/2013
was that the end...*sniff sniff...i cry uncontrolably*...plz dont stop...:'(
PrimaDina chapter 5 . 3/28/2008
'Nothing but heartache and a pretty picture in the stars'

Very very nice! I adored the ending.
PrimaDina chapter 4 . 3/23/2008
I'm sorry, but three and four are brilliant. Your plan backfired, Archie!

Best line is " was Archie's own fault that his teammates wanted to burst down the door and do inappropriate things to him."

Brilliance. What a poor kid. Imagine what's going on on the other side of that door.
SoccerPirate chapter 1 . 2/24/2008
ohh,, very nice story! i can't wait for the update! could you make the capters tiny bit longer though )
TheDragoness1992 chapter 3 . 2/24/2008
This seems very good! I can't wait to read the next one, though are you going to make them longer?
AlienticFrontier chapter 3 . 2/24/2008
Ooh... I like this FanFic.

Oh please, update if you have the time... :DD