Reviews for Golden Apples
atlanta chapter 6 . 10/17/2013
was that the end...*sniff sniff...i cry uncontrolably*...plz dont stop...:'(
PrimaDina chapter 5 . 3/28/2008
'Nothing but heartache and a pretty picture in the stars'

Very very nice! I adored the ending.
PrimaDina chapter 4 . 3/23/2008
I'm sorry, but three and four are brilliant. Your plan backfired, Archie!

Best line is "...it was Archie's own fault that his teammates wanted to burst down the door and do inappropriate things to him."

Brilliance. What a poor kid. Imagine what's going on on the other side of that door.
SoccerPirate chapter 1 . 2/24/2008
ohh,, very nice story! i can't wait for the update! could you make the capters tiny bit longer though )
TheDragoness1992 chapter 3 . 2/24/2008
This seems very good! I can't wait to read the next one, though are you going to make them longer?
AlienticFrontier chapter 3 . 2/24/2008
Ooh... I like this FanFic.

Oh please, update if you have the time... :DD