|Reviews for On Shyness and Sophistication|
| CharizardGirl chapter 1 . 4/22/2013
I am starting to love this pairing sooooo much! XD
Yeah, it was slightly cheesy, but that just made it so much cuter! Agh, I loved this. Great job, and they all seemed in character. Loved it. Now I'm going to go off and read some more of your stories...
| Piloswine's captivating eyes chapter 1 . 7/6/2012
I don't see it too cheesy,it was just beautiful, I really enjoyed reading it. it was a good pause to take my mind away from the worrying of the upcoming exam
| ViBookWorm chapter 1 . 8/8/2011
"Dude!" he shouted, his Horrific Face of Scary changing to a Wrinkled Nose of Disgust. Lucian jumped where he sat and snapped the book shut in an instant, whipping his head around to face the one who had startled him out of his reading, his glasses nearly flying off his face.
"Flint!" he barked, pushing his pale purple glasses back on his face properly and set his face to a much less startled expression. "Learn to knock!"
"I know how to knock." Flint said, setting his elbows on the back of the chair and resting his chin in his hands. "What I didn't know is that you like reading gay porn!"
FUNNIEST DAMN THING ON THE INTERNET! YOU ARE A GENIUS!
| Padfoot Arcanine chapter 1 . 3/12/2011
This was so great! I adore LucianAaron and you did a great job writing them. Keep up the amazing work!
| HybridDragoness chapter 1 . 11/11/2010
Awww man I wish there was more elite-undershipping stories like this. It was funny and sweet. Loved it all!
| SnowLion no Miko chapter 1 . 7/18/2010
I have just recently gotten into all of the Pokemon fanfiction things - though I've watched the show since I was little - and I am so excited to see that there are fics like this out there! With great pairings and that are just amazingly well written. Great work!
| Kimako chapter 1 . 5/4/2010
I thought that it was very funny at the part where flint read Lucian's novel XD love it 3
| Lady Coldfyre chapter 1 . 10/27/2009
This is like the cutest thing ever!~ I simply adore it~
| Tsundragon chapter 1 . 7/16/2009
Ah, this story brought me so much joy.
The way you portray your characters is simple and elegant, all of their best personality features immediately coming to light. The humor was fantastic - it didn't overpower or make you want to roll your eyes. I absolutely fell in love with Aaron all over again, and for all this, I thank you.
Continue to write well. Bravo!
| Shamanic Shaymin chapter 1 . 7/7/2009
Oh gosh. This is made of win on epic proportions. Flint keeps cracking me up throughout the entire fic! Aaron is stubborn and adorable, Lucian being sweet and silly in his politeness, Bertha the kitchen demon, and I liked how you characterized Cynthia as well. Yes Lucian, you DO wake up pretty, especially if you've fallen asleep reading one of your gay pr0-romance novels. X3 I ship EUShipping, and I am a happy happy fangirl~
| The Dragon Lover chapter 1 . 7/5/2009
Oh, man, this makes me laugh so much, and I'm not entirely sure why. XD I mean, it's not overwhelmingly funny like your "Jessie looking in a mirror" story, but it's not super serious either. Eh, another mystery of life, I guess.
Man, after reading this, I want to try this out so bad, but I'd feel I wouldn't give this ship justice. XP And not only because I somehow feel awkward writing homosexual pairings (there's nothing wrong with it, but I don't want to feel like some of those crazy fangirls), but also because I'd probably be terrible at their characters. Congrats at doing something I can't!
Lots of dragon-y love (and cookies!),
~DL ('Dragon Lover')
| zantetsuren chapter 1 . 6/12/2009
I LOVE THIS. SO VERY MUCH. There are no words to describe how beautiful this is.
THERE ARE NO WORDS.
Adding this to my favorites kthxbai. 3
| TehTwinkleAlchemist chapter 1 . 1/9/2009
Okay, after reading that I just HAVE to review!
I don't really wanna believe it myself but I've just spend the past two hours searching for the name of that shipping. And after reading this fic it was TOTALLY worth it!
What can I say, OTP, only reason I've been looking up Pokemon episodes on YouTube! EliteUndershippingEpicWin!
Although you could, y'know, rename it Prettyshipping, I guess.
Okay, enough rambling. I just can't put into any other words other than 'OMG LOVE!1!1' Your style of writing is so so cute. I mean, I don't really know how the characters act but, judging from the games and what I've seen; you gott'em practically perfect! I can so imagine Lucien like that. And the characters you gave to both Bertha and Flint really made the story even more interesting.
And it's so long (all the more to love) but you write so much without the story once getting boring. XD I think I'll read it again! EUShip love!
And yah, you made me laugh! How could I not at Flint? LOL, THAT GIRL IS UBER FUNEHEH!1!1
I soo have to read more of your work now or at least really soon! Ttyl, Twinkle X
| twilightpath chapter 1 . 11/12/2008
Aw~ That was so cute! :3 You got all of the personalities down perfectly, and the part with Cynthia and the feeding tubes made me laugh at the computer. x3 Lucian and Cynthia read romance novels (Flint argues that they're "gay porn"). o-o;; I LOL'ed at that as well.
| IceCrome chapter 1 . 11/5/2008
How about them apples.
Yes, so, very funny. Bertha and Flint acting like two-year-olds was amusing. Although I don't like Aaron with anybody, (The boy is too goddamn adorable,) I found this to be a good read.
Why can't he be real...?