|Reviews for Edited By|
| Ale chapter 1 . 4/14/2013
That was pretty hilarious. I really liked it, especially Hakkai and Hazel's insult battle. The stuff with Otohime and Kanzeon was another of my favorite parts.
| Shella chapter 1 . 5/27/2010
MARRY ME. NOW.
Correspondence course on Southern slang, bloody hell. That just made my day.
The intensity and joy and hilarity of this fic are of truly goddessly proportions. Such a simple scenario, expanded to epic quantities of win.
Your fics consistently have vividly IC dialogue and characterisation, and this is another shining example of your perfect understanding and articulation of the Sanzo-ikkou. Thank you, thank you for this interlude of awesome funny. I bow down to you. *bow*
| Youkai Of Hearts chapter 1 . 5/24/2010
Haha, I have to say, I haven't laughed this hard in ages, or I would be permitted too if I wasn't in class, and I have to say it's been awhile since I've read one of your pieces, I still love to read your works!
Hope u keep writing
| Freaking Cage chapter 1 . 1/12/2009
You are a GENIUS. I was laughing so much throughout this whole thing! The creativity of it alone makes this epic worthy, much less the actual insults you thought of and the boys' reactions to them.
Sanzo bitch-slapping Gojyo with divine retribution made me laugh so hard I thought my spleen ruptured.
Hakkai and Hazel's Battle of the Banter made me chuckle like a woodchuck.
This was birdy rad!
| reckless-rage chapter 1 . 12/3/2008
Buahahahahaha! I think that's hilarious! XD Bread boxes FTW!
I now also need to find a correspondence course in telling people off in Southern slang...
| Everybody's Neesan chapter 1 . 6/23/2008
Yay for strange randomness! Correspondence courses in Southern slang... what a peculiar idea!
| fornicatedsin chapter 1 . 5/12/2008
This was so funny it made me cry, laughing. Wow if there really was an episode where they couldn't curse...
| Setsuna-X chapter 1 . 4/27/2008
This was by far the most hilarious Saiyuki fic I have ever read and I totally loved it. Tears of mirth were falling from my eyes! Incredible writing and story.
| ArcticPhoenix91 chapter 1 . 4/4/2008
It really HAS been a while anyway, your writing is still the best I've ever read. In this sparticular story, it's all about your way of putting a REAL (not forced, like most of other fics tend to have-no offense, but it's true) humor. I await for more of your writing, especially Dysphoria. JUST WHERE THE HELL HAVE YA BEEN? Hehe, sorry. Just miss ya a lot. Do update and please write more humor fics!
| missingkitsune chapter 1 . 2/28/2008
OMG! i have tears running down my face from laughing so hard. very funny story.
| jarm chapter 1 . 2/25/2008
AHH what the hilly-o! Welcome back. Great funny story!
| AShauni21 chapter 1 . 2/25/2008
I loved this story. Maybe it's because I've been Saiyuki deprived for the last few months or maybe because I'm southern but I think that is one of the funniest things you've ever written. The only way it could've been better is if you had worked in 'kiss my grits'.
As for trimming, well I agree with everyone else that the beginning is going to be your best bet, maybe a word here and there between Hazel and Gojyo. But leave everything with Hakkai and Hazel.
| Attiqah Gensui chapter 1 . 2/25/2008
oh god, i just... *breathe*
did I ever tell you that Hakkai vs Hazel verbal faceoff was one of my favourite loves ever?
hmn, anywhere to cut? I dunno, the into with the dragon princess was nice, but if you need to cut anything, I would say that part.
Loves the awesomeness!
| Midnite chapter 1 . 2/24/2008
"This blows massive acorns!" So funny! How is it that you are so amazing? You are one of the best Saiyuki fanfic authors here! I wish you would finish Dysphoria though...
"She was hardly worthy to lick the ground the goddess spat on." is the only specific line I could pick out, that you could remove. Like everyone else said, just trim some of the Otohime worship and Hazel detail.
And please, show Dysphoria some love soon!
| Arugula Pacioli chapter 1 . 2/24/2008
This was hilarious! Hahaha! You're a genius for coming up with so many weird insults!HAHA!