|Reviews for The beginning|
| SomeGuyFawkes chapter 1 . 8/29/2009
| Ileah chapter 1 . 8/1/2009
Uh, HOW exactly is that a oneshot? That was a total cliffhanger! I may cry if there's no update. Here's an analogy for you: you just hung a juicy chunk of poisoned ham in front of a pack of starving hounds... With your bare hands and no armor. Not very smart, is it? Update or I'll threaten you with something drastic!
| mayatrau chapter 1 . 8/14/2008
sound nice... kind of unfinished for a oneshot but if you'll continue i'll read it! :)