|Reviews for To Be Whole|
| Coolfire30 chapter 1 . 12/22/2017
ehhhh I wasn't so sold on this one but as always you do have fantastic ideas...
| Wicked.Onna chapter 1 . 12/8/2017
brilliant idea and so well written would love to read more
| MoonPrincess623 chapter 1 . 2/1/2017
A part of me wants you to expand this, but its cute the way it is.
| Meeshkla18 chapter 1 . 2/16/2016
It was such a sweet ending ! A sad beginning but that's what made it so beautiful. Thank you for this wonderful one-shot !:))
| WhiteRose-Kurama chapter 1 . 8/27/2013
Very well done one-shot. I enjoyed from start to finish. Keep up the good work. :P
| Akitorai chapter 1 . 5/2/2013
,...Wheres Kohaku? o.o
Great One Shot! But why do humans Fear Kagome...? I still dont get it.
| wolfYLady-sama chapter 1 . 2/6/2013
That was so cute! AWESOME JOB!
| EverRose808 chapter 1 . 3/1/2012
I love your story! Please add at least one more chapter? I just want to see Sesshomaru's and Kouga's reactions! :)
| ishala8 chapter 1 . 12/14/2009
It is really sweet. A Forbidden Child and the Shikon Miko are the perfect match in my opinion! o
Still, I can't help but wonder if daiyoukai are capable of having heart attacks. If its possible, the Northern and Western Lords are sure to have one when the identity of Kagome's mate gets out. XD
| Rhianna224 chapter 1 . 5/24/2009
| forgotten0children chapter 1 . 2/2/2009
I have read numerous stories done by you and you have a knack for (fingering) during smut scenes are you embarrassed to write them?
| ILoveAnime89 chapter 1 . 1/30/2009
Love it. .
| Haru Inuzuka chapter 1 . 12/22/2008
-smiles with a blush- I'm glad Hiei and Kagome got together, they deserve someone to love who will love them in return. Plz keep up the great writing!
| enchanted nightingale chapter 1 . 11/6/2008
| loretta537 chapter 1 . 10/13/2008
such a good story, it only took two and a half hours, that means you can write 3 stories a day right? more please