Reviews for The Enemy Without
The God Emperor of Mankind chapter 2 . 1/30
why didn't you finish this story!?
this is HERESY!
SmokeTinyTom chapter 2 . 11/6/2014
Give us more.
Brother Sergeant Aeron chapter 2 . 6/22/2012
Amazing story, I am hoping for many new chapters in the immediate future.
amorac chapter 2 . 6/27/2011
ok this is a concept that i truly love being a huge fan of both mass effect and warhammer 40K and id love to see more of this
SirLagginton chapter 2 . 10/21/2010
...

MUST. HAVE. MOAR!

Awesome concept, grammar and spelling (thank god) ain't too shabby either. Even though its been two years wouldn't you at least consider restarting this again? PLEEEEASE?

MOAR!
A.Sheppard chapter 2 . 2/17/2010
This is really exciting to read, please update I am enjoying this. will be cool if they meet Shepard.
mf chapter 2 . 1/27/2010
more please
mf chapter 2 . 1/7/2010
more please
Chris Adair chapter 2 . 11/28/2009
That was awesome! i can't wait for the next bit.
mf chapter 2 . 11/24/2009
more please
Imperial Bob chapter 2 . 11/24/2009
Did I say might wanna pick back up on it?... well I meant PICK BACK UP ON IT NOW! DO IT!
Imperial Bob chapter 1 . 11/19/2009
You should pick back up with this.
mf chapter 2 . 10/13/2009
mor please
Olrik chapter 1 . 5/3/2009
Pretty cool so far, keep going!
Vanbor the Fire Mage chapter 2 . 3/31/2009
cool story please update
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