Reviews for The Enemy Without
The God Emperor of Mankind chapter 2 . 1/30/2016
why didn't you finish this story!?
this is HERESY!
SmokeTinyTom chapter 2 . 11/6/2014
Give us more.
Brother Sergeant Aeron chapter 2 . 6/22/2012
Amazing story, I am hoping for many new chapters in the immediate future.
amorac chapter 2 . 6/27/2011
ok this is a concept that i truly love being a huge fan of both mass effect and warhammer 40K and id love to see more of this
SirLagginton chapter 2 . 10/21/2010


Awesome concept, grammar and spelling (thank god) ain't too shabby either. Even though its been two years wouldn't you at least consider restarting this again? PLEEEEASE?

A.Sheppard chapter 2 . 2/17/2010
This is really exciting to read, please update I am enjoying this. will be cool if they meet Shepard.
mf chapter 2 . 1/27/2010
more please
mf chapter 2 . 1/7/2010
more please
Chris Adair chapter 2 . 11/28/2009
That was awesome! i can't wait for the next bit.
mf chapter 2 . 11/24/2009
more please
Imperial Bob chapter 2 . 11/24/2009
Did I say might wanna pick back up on it?... well I meant PICK BACK UP ON IT NOW! DO IT!
Imperial Bob chapter 1 . 11/19/2009
You should pick back up with this.
mf chapter 2 . 10/13/2009
mor please
Olrik chapter 1 . 5/3/2009
Pretty cool so far, keep going!
Vanbor the Fire Mage chapter 2 . 3/31/2009
cool story please update
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